Five of the Mane6 decide to pull a "little" surprise party for their dear friend Twilight, unwitting of the consequences it will wrought.

This is the first story in the "Surprise on Short notice" series.
The other entries can be found here:
1st: You are here.
2nd: Surprise on Short notice 2, Applejack & Fluttershy
3rd: Surprise on Short notice 3, Rarity & Pinkie Pie.


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Proofreader for this story was Dendollae, who also did the icon, many thanks to them.

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(Spoilers)
(Character Quote: "Ya better watch out, mrs. smarty-pants." -Rainbow Dash )


(Quick guide:

Friends preparing party.

After 1st: Shrinking, shrunk, itty ponies, something goes wrong, hoof crush object, swatted away.

After 2nd: Recovery, dealing with damage, hope wearing thin. )




(Legend:

Cent: Short term for centimetre.
Deci: Short term for decimetre.
Chronicle: A series of stories connected but not sequential. Ongoing stories without regular updates.
Rapacitor: A predator who eats for the sake of greed and gluttony.)


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