Posted by Dews 1 year ago Report

While it didn't happen in the first week, I have a sneaking suspicion something like this will be possible in a second week or later in the game once Osmium finally gets there.

In the meantime, this particular iteration of the SMVA verse will just have to get along without one of its best characters. Alas!

Though really I find Emma to be protesting too much given how she frequently murders people while drunk.

I mean from a standpoint of all vore being murder I agree with her in a sense, but like... that's what we're here for, it's why you exist, Emma, to be in a vorish world for kinky people to get off on.

Anygay enough silliness: this was quite good and I enjoyed the alternate take on things here. I particularly like how much on Sam's side this Mary was, even if I rarely find myself happily on Sam's side in playthroughs. (I Will admit: as soon as it becomes possible I'll make it a habit to eat Sam every game. I dislike her and her sister due to their sheer cruelty.)

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Yea, I like Sam, but people very much fall into two camps regarding her. Either they really like her, or they don’t. I’m glad you gave things a read though! I uploading some updates to the story too as I am typing this, haha.

Posted by HunterZ 1 year ago Report

Quite the Freudian slip for an attempt to avoid silliness.

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

I think it’s a joke haha

Posted by Dews 1 year ago Report

It was intentional.

Posted by Kyroshiro 1 year ago Report

Another excellent work! I must say as much as I adore Emma, seeing these alternate takes in which she gets gurgled is nice to see. Ever since I got this scene, I always imagined an alternate take in which Sam just walks off after having eaten Emma instead of just standing there till Mary got to her.

The color coding/formatting was just fine. I especially love the mixing of Emma's color with the game over text towards the end.

Great work as always!

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Yea, I’m having fun with messing around with colors. I’m glad you enjoyed this alternative take!

Posted by coolblooded 1 year ago Report

Another good smva story!!!! Another idea thats challenging the headmristress evalyn inedia. Plus professor juniper from orientation, or professor steria,the one you give the key to.

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Those are fun ideas. I may wait until the OG creator creates more interactions with those characters though. I need more information to work with.

Posted by 101danmnations 1 year ago Report

Wow this was a great one!

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thank you! What was your favorite part?

Posted by 101danmnations 1 year ago Report

Many parts. What I really like is how you make it seem like it came straight out of the game itself!

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Awww thanks. I really tried to make it seem Authentic

Posted by torontofan 1 year ago Report

This is the scene I always wanted! Excellent worknas usual Dream!

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks buddy! Yea, people have been asking for this one for a long time!

Posted by Fiowus 1 year ago Report

I really enjoyed reading it. good job

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks buddy! I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Posted by SexyGoddessPria 1 year ago Report

Usually never comment, but DAYUM. I think you
emulated all 3 personalities very well, were good at being descriptive, and did an amazing job overall! Nice work. (I did see a missed opportunity for anal vore, what with all the asshole taunting though~)

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Haha! I was tempted to add some Anal, but I didn’t want to deviate too much. Thanks! I try to get into the head of my characters a bit when I write

Posted by Segundoetapa 1 year ago Report

I love this alternative end, hopefully it might happen in the actual game haha. The color text is really great also def a keeper. Another great story what else can I say ~

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I’m glad people are liking the color text! I was unsure if it was helpful or not~

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

I have not checked out SMVA in a while, did they add a option to willingly throw prey up.

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

You definitely can lose~

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

And I have deliberately lost but that not the same as willingly spare the prey. I do not want the prey to win, I want the prey to realize they have been given mercy.

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Yea, I’m not sure if that functionality is included. I think it will be a nightmare to plan around.

Posted by Dews 1 year ago Report

There is one scene where you can explicitly grant mercy to Betty, when hunting for her with Emma. Emma has to have sufficient hearts for you to have a reason to listen to her opinions, and you spare Betty at the last second. No idea what ramifications this will have further down the line but I suspect once further weeks are added it will be a serious thing.

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

That’s pretty cool. I hope she can become an ally!

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

That is really cool, I love to see things like that.

Posted by pbysteria 1 year ago Report

I see more mary x sam i slam that favorite button. really fun to read! loved sam's rough handling of emma and her downstairs gains

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Those two are equally chaotic~

Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report

I enjoyed this one. Thank you for writing it. One of the reasons that I like this story is because the game had enough content to feel like I was getting to know the characters.

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

That’s great! I’m glad you enjoyed it, buddy. It was one of the ones you suggested that I found interesting

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

Loved it!

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed this one!

Posted by AntimatterX 1 year ago Report

do you still have the thumbnail?

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

I’m afraid not buddy~

Posted by AntimatterX 1 year ago Report

:(

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

I’m sorry. I have a constant need to clear space in my device~

Posted by AntimatterX 1 year ago Report

I feel you :(