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Lizzie the Glutton By DreamEater -- Report

As students of Dream State University, it's important for you and Lily to take a break from student life occasionally. However, things are a bit complicated with you possessing strong....feelings for Lily. With you having a rather significant crush on your roommate and friend, you finally believe that it's time to act on your pent up emotions. It would be a shame if someone interrupted...

This story features Lizzie from "The Freshmen" series. This is also a rather extensive remake of "The Glutton" story that features this character. Check it out here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/861539

Let me know what you think about Lizzie as a character! I'll write more on her if interest is high!

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DracoMeteor

Posted by DracoMeteor 1 year ago Report

Oh, Lizzie is so uncaring. I love her!

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Oh she cares about “something”, amirite?!

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

I was cheering for the prey, but she should of realized the moment she was alone in the stomach.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

In her defense, digestion is normally supposed to take wayyy longer than that. Horrible luck~

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Glad you didn’t lose her sociopathic traits in the upgraded story. And the way you’re righting now is more and more like a game . You should totally consider doing one

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I’ve been getting more decent with making my stories easier to read. I have a long way to go before I’m game worthy though~

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

You have far less work than you think . If you had just started with a game instead of writing your stories it still would’ve been one of the best .

What you should do is make a Twine game or a Choose your own adventure interactive . Because you are really good

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks buddy! I’ll consider it! Tbh, I’ve never thought much about my writing skill before, but it’s nice knowing that people consider it to be good.

Segundoetapa

Posted by Segundoetapa 1 year ago Report

Damn probably my favorite story so far. Honestly outdone yourself with this one, her nonchalant gluttony was amazing can’t wait for your next original story they never disappoint!

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks buddy! Yea, I think I’m getting the hang of writing a bit! Thanks for reading all of it!