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I know this is a LOT of filth to drop on you guys for a second upload but I've had this concept stuck in my head for years and needed to get it out. Hopefully some of you guys are gross enough to be as into this as I am.
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I like the story, and I appreciate you writing and posting it. Indigestion can be really fun for slowing digestion and making the pred suffer from trying to digest their prey. Sometimes it is fun when the prey's struggles upset the stomach, and extend their life. I really like the idea of a girl going into a stomach to try to find out what is wrong and fix the problem. Ellie is such a fun and digestible girl. On the other hand, my suspension of disbelief is stretched by Zach's stomach no longer digesting the cheerleader's legs once her upper body is stuck in Zach's sphincter. Once I accept that, then the story subjectively works for me.
I like the idea of indigestion so much, I have some suggestions for you. If bones are indigestible, or if a pred's stomach is weak from a condition, then they might have to pass thru the intestines, or be regurgitated. Clothes could be indigestible, or have chemicals in them that upset a pred's stomach. A prey's breast implants could even upset a pred's stomach after he digests her. That reminds me of a story where a male pred has to go to the doctor to get the indigestible items out of his stomach. He eats the female nurse and doctor. https://aryion.com/g4/view/458743
As for the filth, I do not mind it. I like when the scat and the items in the scat show details about the prey.
Posted by SkittlesDemon 1 year ago Report
Once again, pressed so many of my buttons. So hot. I kept checking back to see if you had posted again, glad that you have.
Posted by PinkJazz 1 year ago Report
I've definitely got a lot of ideas I wanna post! It's just a matter of finding time to get them all on paper :/
Posted by Hezroar 1 year ago Report
That sure is dusgusting! Great work
Posted by RDRW 1 year ago Report
Wow, I really love all the details about this digestion, or, also indigestion in this case. Great work!
Posted by Kelly 1 year ago Report
I L O V E I T
Posted by TheTrollMan 1 year ago Report
Gotta love willing gutsluts~ a meal knowing it’s place is just about the hottest things~