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Been a while since I wrote a regular Steven Universe vore story. Things started out weak initially, struggled to get back into the mindset of these characters. Hopefully by the end, I shook off enough rust to craft an enjoyable story. As always, I thank my fellow fan and friend, z3d, for offering all the support in the world!
Posted by z3d 1 year ago Report
Always happy to help : D
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Posted by thequietmanno1 1 year ago Report
I like connie, and I like butt expansion. Little put off by how mean everybody was compared to their usual characterisation, but a good read regardless.
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 1 year ago Report
Yeaaaaaah… I tried to imply Connie’s Diamond Power transformation corrupted her somewhat, at least to exaggerate her frustrations with the Crystal Gems into outright hatred. But I feel like there wasn’t enough presence in the plot to indicate that. That, and most of the Crystal Gems are too quick to turn on Connie.
I had fun working on this with my friend z3d and I feel like the methods Connie uses to crush the Crystal Gems are creative, but this is one of my weaker stories. :T
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Posted by Alumni 1 year ago Report
I read this in one sitting and I adore it! I don't disagree that the characters felt mean compared to in the show but at the same time sacrifices to show fidelity have to be made if we want to see Connie eating a bunch of gems and growing into a goddess, which is a net good.
It would've been nice to see Steven's reaction after, I feel. A short blurb to show his reaction to hearing his aunts/moms got turned into gem dust in Connie's colon, juxtaposed with him just loving how hot Connie is now
Not that it's my story or anything. Great work nonetheless!
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Posted by Spider8Fiend 1 year ago Report
There was some debate on making an epilogue, one where Steven & Connie are married and have a healthy sex life and Pearl is so overwhelmed that she essentially becomes a sexbot. Ultimately it was decided that would push Steven OOC too and was too mean to Pearl, so it was kept out. But I do like your idea :)
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Posted by maxpayne98 1 year ago Report
I loved the story, top tier!
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