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Muffin and Raven are two predators who couldn't be any more different. One can barely handle a single person while the other devours them by the dozen.
What would happen if they went on a journey together? Even under very silly circumstances? Would they be friends, rivals, lovers?
Or perhaps the ending was written on the wall from the very start.
Alternate Name:Two bitches eat Pizza Hut out of Business while a horny gutslut watches
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Raven is fluffylizardfuntime. She's been super lovely these last few weeks as I've hung around in her server. You should ABSOLUTELY come check it out. We get up to some very silly shenanigans. https://discord.gg/geD9BFSF
Also this has my new avatar, Muffin. Despite how the story goes you will see more of her.
Here's some art of Muffin if you wanna see~
https://aryion.com/g4/view/910555
In fact, artwork for both of us was done by jellyrolls. Nobody involved owns Pizza hut. Except maybe Raven's ass. Who knows at this point. (her art is her own commission that may be linked depending on what she chooses to do with it)
This story had a surprising amount of effort put into it. So if you enjoyed it please speak up and check out Raven's work as well! She absolutely deserves your attention.
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Posted by RavenRoberts 1 year ago Report
yaaaaaas is live!! You did such a good job with this hun, verr proud of you~<3
maybe next time you could try not to give me such bad gas though ~///~
Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report
It was so much fun to write Raven and I'm really happy with how it turned out!
Sorry hun, I'm always too noisy. And being digested isn't gonna change that~
Posted by randomuser13579 1 year ago Report
I could see how the story would end up but I still hoped it would be different .Very much enjoyed muffin and all her interactions hope this isn’t the final time we see her.
Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report
Raven is quite thr force of nature. Its what makes her stand out so much as a predator. Truly apex.
There will be more Muffin content. I already have some written in fact. I just wanted to write something with my new friends character. And this was the ending that made so much sense.
For the record, Raven told me "She almost wanted them to get away." So maybe there is room for an alternate ending where Muffin and Emmy live happily.
Posted by RoTheHuman 1 year ago Report
Oh, I really, really enjoyed this! ^_^ The first half with the funny setup of Muffin and Raven collaborating to devour all pizza huts (well, mostly Raven) was silly and fun, and then the way it transitioned into focusing more on the relationships between the characters was just lovely and got me totally sucked in. The emotional payoff of the ending was great! I'm such a hopeless romantic when it comes to vore, and the way things ended for Emma and Muffin was fantastic. Emma exemplifies a devoted willing prey -- something you wouldn't be surprised to learn I admire a lot! -- and the way Muffin managed to leave a mark on the psyche of Raven of all people was a really cool touch. <3
Also you did a great job having so many people get grossly and unceremoniously shat out. :-D
Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report
I thought you may like Emma and Muffin. Felt like a relationship that really appealed to your tastes. <3
Handling Raven was fun too. Shes such a force of nature. Inevitable~
Chatting with Raven, she was actually rooting for Muffin and Emma. But alas... twas not to be~
Posted by Haleviathan 1 year ago Report
Hott
Posted by xvx17 1 year ago Report
It's hard for me to describe how much I liked this story, the evolution of the relationship between muffin and Emma. Emma is so sweet, even after Muffin ate her girlfriend, she holds no grudges and takes the best care of her. Muffin is the closest thing to a Tsundere, she really enjoys Emma's company but she doesn't want to admit it, because that would make her look weak and since she's been hurt a lot, she wanted to become someone stronger. However, in the end he couldn't hide his feelings for Emma anymore. I think I can imagine the look on muffin's face after taking a shit the next morning, Emma was no longer around to massage her tummy, Muffin knew that would happen, but maybe she never imagined becoming so attached to the prey. The fact that Emma has taken note of the entire trip with such affection of hers is somewhat nostalgic after her departure.
I also thought that Muffin's first prey was his first friend, someone who taught him that he was worth it. And show her that she was so valuable to him that he would let her eat him. And maybe from that moment Muffin started his diary to never forget it (but it's only a supposition) I find it nice that a predator values the people he ate, even though when they enter his stomach they are nothing more than food and shit afterwards, the only thing that really remains is the memory of them in the mind of his predator.
The vore is almost always something cruel, sad but at the same time exciting, you give everything you are to your predator.
This story made me smile, it made me sad, excited, angry. And I could perfectly imagine the settings and the characters. I could write many more things that I loved about this story, but I think it's better to end here.
Thanks for writing this.
Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report
<3 Im glad you enjoyed it so thuroughly. I did really like the topics and themes i got to explore in this. Its funny to think this story came about because if a silly joke i made on twitter.