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A young Dragon Rider named Braxia is assigned the task of travelling to an unfamiliar land to learn about its people, their culture, and their problems.
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Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report
Great story i look forward to the next entry in the series sky sounds like a hot male dragon hes great work D r aken top teir as always
Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report
Thank you
Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report
Yor welcome
Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report
An interesting series beginning.
Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report
Thank you
Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report
You're welcome.
Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
This was a highly enjoyable first chapter, I love the adventure vibe I get from reading this and to see you put a few nuances on stereotypes, with the exception of the bunny girls XD
A kitsune who isn't totally self-absorbed and a satyr that isn't sex-crazy makes for an interesting start, I wonder how that will go!
The vore sequence was also fantastic, I absolutely loved seeing the troll stuffing himself with the three bunny girls (though I was wondering if they would be given bigger roles since you named three of them) and was mildly surprised to see Braxia going out to save them!
I'm looking forward to see what happens in the next chapter^^
Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report
Thank you!
It's a theme I would like to have going through this particular mini-series to have things not always be what they first appear.