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Tags: ?/F ambiguous pred crushing Digestion dominant pred dub-con dubious consent F/F Fatal Female Pred Female Prey first person Graphic digestion Human Prey Lamia Lamia Pred lamia/human M/F Male Pred pred perspective Semi-willing Semi-willing to Unwilling Semi-willing to Unwilling prey Story submissive prey written work
My second story! While my first is very romantic, sweet, and consensual, this one is not. At all.
I wanted to have Lana be the centerpiece of my next story and explore her relationship with domination and submission. The poor woman just wants to experience intimacy and romance, but she's too shy to go out and find it. She also has this way of having her will get overridden by someone dominant enough that presses her buttons in just the right way. That means preds can easily take advantage of her! And this one sure does.
I intentionally left the identity of the pred as ambiguous, including their gender. You can imagine any lamia you want in there! Personally every time I reread the story I kept bouncing back and forth between a male and female pred. I think it works great both ways.
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Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report
really nice. Enjoyed the interactions bettween them a lot!
Posted by OishiAtsukau 1 year ago Report
Typically not a very big fan of graphic, though this wasn't quite graphic enough to trigger that distaste! Very good story, absolutely loved the interactions especially those when things started getting saucy!
Cant wait for more :D
Posted by RoTheHuman 1 year ago Report
Thanks! <3 I did try to hold back a bit on the graphicness of the digestion, and instead have it come through Lana's reactions. Glad it worked for you!
Also, I think it's funny that I'm not sure at which point things started getting saucy for you! Because with people here, it could be at any point. Is it when they kissed? When the lamia licked Lana? Or swallowed Lana? Or when Lana started to digest? I suppose those parts were all pretty saucy... :-D
Posted by OishiAtsukau 1 year ago Report
Yea lmao, pretty much all of it tbh lol
Posted by Whymanamajeff 1 year ago Report
A wholesome encounter I’d say. A stickler for well written ‘willing-unwilling’ and you’ve nailed it!
Posted by RoTheHuman 1 year ago Report
Glad you liked it! <3 I really enjoy writing Lana since she's all about "willing-unwilling".
Posted by Courier3227 1 year ago Report
You said you held back don’t. Should do an entirely unwilling story where a girl is digested the same way but begging to be let out
Posted by RoTheHuman 1 year ago Report
I may at some point, but my favorite kind of prey are the ones who mix willingness and unwillingness somehow. I always want there to be some kind of internal drama for them. So their motivation could be described either as "I want this but..." or "I don't want this but...". The "but" is really important!