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Tags: ?/? anonymous pred anonymous predator Apartment Cheetah cheetah girl Cheetah woman conflict Corruption crying pred elevator Female Prey grief horror themed hunger pangs Imprisoned pred Imprisonment jail jail cell loss Loss of Identity M/F Male Pred Moral dilemma morality police Police Officer Policewoman Pred in pain psychological psychological torture Riot sentient stomach squirrel prey Tragedy Transformation Unwilling Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey unwilling transformation Wolf Pred
Wow. This story was a lot harder to write than I thought it would be. Special thanks to OishiAtsukau for constant help on planning and tweaking of the plot. A LOT of this story had to be made up as I wrote, and it was hard figuring out a lot of the HOWs. But either way, here we are.
This story follows Niesha, a cheetah woman working in the Chicago Police Deparement. In the midst of this national tragedy that changed everyone's lives, the work of a Police officer is never done.
Also slight, brief implication of suicide, though there is none that takes place.
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Posted by Skittles209 1 year ago Report
No, it ended so soon.
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
The choice she made will be forever shrouded in mystery!
Maybe.
Posted by Tastypred 1 year ago Report
I don't have words. I feel for Niesha, she definitely didn't deserve what she got, but then, neither did any of those prisoners. This world you're shaping is an impossibly cruel, realistic representation of what would happen if Vore suddenly became possible, and I can't look away.
It also just occurred to me that this world of yours has all of the cities we do, cars that we do, presumably brands that we do. How is this tragedy affecting vore communities like Eka's and FA?
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed!
And also, yes I've thought of that. You will see in due time!
Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report
You know, I suspected that there would be some tainted protein powder...it really is a dystopian setting, at this point. Very nicely done.
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Well, it wasn't just the protien powder, remember Lydia was taking weight gain supplements and Appetite stimulants. It's in more than you think.
Posted by nephilim 1 year ago Report
A'ight.
Cheap bottle of bourbon in hand? I already like where this is headed.
I love, love, love third-person omniscient scenes that characterizes one of the five senses as a story vehicle: here, you rigging the scene with 'silence.'
hahaha "Jamie" is a real charmer. But I like his voice already, even if the text messages.
The bear reminds me, a little bit, of the characters from Beastars
Somehow, this focus on her small mouth and throat feels to me that there is some foreshadowing amuck hmmmmmmmm
A MOOSE AS THE COMMANEDER. I LOVE IT.
AHHHHHH OMG THIS IS PART OF YOUR SENTIENT STOMACH UNIVERSE. YAAAAAS
Slightly overweight squirrel. I see thin-privilege is alive and well in this universe LOL
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH the poor victim narrating how slowly they're being eaten. delicious <3
I love how Niesha goes from the pinnacle of silence to over-saturation of sound. be careful what you wish for!
Battle ropes and whiskey. that'll be my next venture.
HA. caffeinated creatine. LORDT
I felt like we were in Tartarus with the inmate scene
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Omg THANKS for reading! Glad you enjoyed!
Yes the Silence was the overarching theme I went with. It was a fuckton of fun to write.
Jamie is supposed to be a last resort. Start a story with the LAST resort. That REALLY makes everything fucked.
The squirrel i tried to make as sad and as fucked as possible. How was she?
Yes niesha was HELLA upset!
And I'm glad it felt that way. The inmate scene is supposed to be the literal shape of a nightmare.
As Niesha put it, "A scenic tour through hell."