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Are you guys ready for another DreamEater Story?
Of course you are! Well this story features a student of Dream State University named Misty as she attempts to deal with being ejected from the university volleyball team, The Dream State Vipers. Sadly, many of the girls have completely cut her off socially, but at least one of her former teammates is willing to talk to her...
This story features our favorite, energetic athlete, Amelia, as she attempts to carry her team to another championship. This is also a heavy revision of the "Eating the Competition" story! If you want to read the origional, Click here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/885996
Also, let me know if you enjoy Amelia as a character! I try to write with a lot of different personality types. So, let me know how I do from time to time.
As usual, if you rock with me, please, please, please leave a comment and hit that watch button!
You guys are awesome and your many interactions and insights with my work keeps me writing free of charge!
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Posted by Segundoetapa 1 year ago Report
So glad to see a story of best girl Amelia it’s been a while ~
This is by far my favorite revision you’ve done. The way you’ve conveyed tense moments and vorny dialogue has improved greatly throughout your story’s :3
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate it! I try to make any revision I make very distinct from the story it’s based upon~
Posted by Segundoetapa 1 year ago Report
Best part is most of your work lives in the same universe and those pivotal moments where a major player could get ate or completely subvert expectations are quite enjoyable and looking forward to how you progress with characters :3
Maybe be an interactive like SMV someday xd
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Thanks, buddy! That means a lot!
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
Was routing for Misty.
That said it sounds like she may of been kicked off for the team for a reason, considering how she blames someone for daring to get in the way. What exactly happened to get her kicked off.
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
She refused to apologize when she hurt one of her teammates, accidentally~
Posted by Skullhammer123 1 year ago Report
You know with all the disappearances that Amelia has been causing, I wouldn't be surprised if the predators association pays her a visit. I would love to see that scenario happen.
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Oh, The predator's association hasn't been idle at all. I am just finishing a bit of the ground work.
Posted by Skullhammer123 1 year ago Report
Ooh, you've definitely caught my interest now. Can't wait~
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Thanks for reading bud! I appreciate it!
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Even in this one I still route for misty over Amelia , although in the first version misty was a bit more sympathetic and Amelia much less. But then Amelia at least had some sort of regret . Now though , she’s kinda reminds me of one of Charles mansons brides . They lack any real free will other than what he told them , yet they’re still just as evil as he was .
Marie is clearly controling Amelia , but Amelia is still an objectively horrible person. Maybe one day we will get a story where Amelia eats Marie and we get to see her feel guilty for all the friends she killed in service to her master . Misty was definitely right lol
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Misty wasn’t perfect, but she did have great instincts regarding people’s motivations~
Posted by infinitegest 1 year ago Report
LOVE this one SO much! the references to her past meals were very good, amped up the danger for Misty to realise her old friends were padding out Amelia's figure.
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Thanks! I really tried to ease you into how things went down within the volleyball team.
Posted by jgzman 1 year ago Report
Not sure if Amelia or Betty is my favorite of your characters, but it's always nice to see either of them, and, briefly, their meals.
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Aww thanks! Amelia is my character, but Betty doesn't belong to me! She's based off of Os's characters from a popular vore game, SMVA. Thanks for reading though!
Posted by Lugdunum 1 year ago Report
Amelia is truly one of the best characters. I like that his motivation to eat is not necessarily due to his hunger but to more selfish reasons
Posted by Lugdunum 1 year ago Report
I hope we see her again in other stories
eh eh
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Hah, I’m glad that you like her! She’s pretty fun to write on!
Posted by Lugdunum 1 year ago Report
Hehe cool. I was wondering something, on an old post here and you still do it on DA you put AI images to illustrate. And I was wondering that PROMPT was using you to generate girls with such big bellies? Because I can't find a quick answer. But if you don't want to say it, I'll understand
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Okay, feel free to DM me on discord, and i'll try to help you when i'm free~
Posted by Lugdunum 1 year ago Report
oh ok thanks