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The sequel to A Mage’s Inner Fire. Cali risks losing control of her inner fire, and a new threat emerges.
F/F, ?/F, Post Unbirth, Post Vore, Non-Fatal, Permanent Entrapment
There is no actual direct vore scene in this one, but a fair amount of post vore/unbirth. There is a third instalment planned after this one.

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AGuyWithBigHair

Posted by AGuyWithBigHair 1 year ago Report

Absolutely wonderful! Didn't expect a follow up but it is lovely.

drunkchipdip

Posted by drunkchipdip 1 year ago Report

Thanks! As mentioned, I'm planning a third, and hopefully the time frame between them will be much shorter.

einerjar

Posted by einerjar 1 year ago Report

Ooh, a Gorgonopsid, my favorite Permian beastie. I assume Grunk is an I. latifrons for maximum size and carry capacity? Not a fan of feral preds personally, but I do hope he makes it out alright.

drunkchipdip

Posted by drunkchipdip 1 year ago Report

Gorgonopsid certainly deserve more love!

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report

Ooh, interesting! I look forward to seeing where you take this from here.

drunkchipdip

Posted by drunkchipdip 1 year ago Report

Glad you liked it! This story was mostly setting the scene for the third part, so I'm looking forward to writing the next instalment.

Arfunkel

Posted by Arfunkel 1 year ago Report

That ending with the mind melding makes me unbelievably excited for the next installment. It's a very well written story as well.

drunkchipdip

Posted by drunkchipdip 1 year ago Report

The mind melding was my favourite part to write for this one, thank you!

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 1 year ago Report

Honestly. My guess for the third is that "fire" becoming possessive over her mother/host. If you think of a mage going from thinking of her womb as a prison... to an opportunity to expand on HER magical research. And if it means turning that "mother" of hers into a surrogate to have as a sort of "body double"...

Then again. I might also bet Cali might be compelled to unbirth another mage. And if that mage just so happens to be stuck inside the womb of her inner fire...

Again. Stray thoughts, and likely will throw my own comment once I've read this story fully. But bias wise, I'd love to see that mind meld/hijack attempt turn, possessive. If Cali's "fire" thinks if she planned to be a mage so badly. Then she may as well accept her fate as a Mages "vessel". But it bleeds both ways?

secretitt

Posted by secretitt 1 year ago Report

I haven't stopped thinking about the last story. Can't wait to read this tonight

Angelicsiren

Posted by Angelicsiren 1 year ago Report

If Cali's dream is anything to go by, I feel like Tyrsia has not only excepted her new home, but is also trying to become one with Cali. Hope Nit gets her own for soon as well.

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 1 year ago Report

If things go swell. Probably would lead to Cali being promoted to "vessel" in the end, so...

hyperxheadphones22

Posted by hyperxheadphones22 1 year ago Report

I WAS WAITING FOR PEAK TO RETURN

Dooot

Posted by Dooot 1 year ago Report

Great stuff! For a new writer, you're real good at this.

Not a fan of feral preds but I hope Nit gets eaten by Grunk again. I really love the concept of a belly being a dedicated home.

Curious what happens to Cali, Tyrisa, and Mifta.

Whereaminow27

Posted by Whereaminow27 1 year ago Report

Not sure where this is going now, but we will see!