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The Duchess By pizza3695 -- Report

So, on the recommendation of  liwenyu I have written a story about a foreign noblewoman becoming high grade fertilizer.

This is a bit of a longer story than normal, as there's a fair bit more world creation for the Legal Prey series. I kinda got a bit carried away with it, if I'm honest.

Anyway, I hope it doesn't detract from the fun!

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NomNexus

Posted by NomNexus 1 year ago Report

Nice and what a way to expand lore. On another note, could a pred trick another one with the 'Opt-out', like a female one using the law to get her prey, only for the prey to eat her instead as she's pretending to be a legal prey.

pizza3695

Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report

Hmmm... probably not something I'll try, but I do like the thought process behind it! Trapping a pred sounds interesting!

NomNexus

Posted by NomNexus 1 year ago Report

Surprised that you don't do a pred trapping another pred to eat or a pred getting force fed at all.

pizza3695

Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report

Pred on Pred really isn't my thing, honestly.

NomNexus

Posted by NomNexus 1 year ago Report

Not even a male pred on a girl pred?

pizza3695

Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report

I much prefer the prey to be... prey!

TMVore

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

I like slow digestion, but this cruel fast sort is just to Karl for me to complain.

Also, recommendations being done, it gives me hope mine might come to life ♡

pizza3695

Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report

Heya, do you mind dropping your suggestion in a DM? I can't seem to find it...

Mulcher

Posted by Mulcher 1 year ago Report

Id love to see karl mow through the female portion of a highschool or two

pizza3695

Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report

They'd need to all be legal ;)

Schrodinger123

Posted by Schrodinger123 1 year ago Report

A typical high school would have roughly at least 500 students. The female portion of that would be around 50 %, so 250 at the least.
Dealing with that, many calories would be the equivalent of an atomic bomb and that is not a joke

Secondly no matter how legal that invites heavy reprisals

pizza3695

Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report

Both very valid points.

Whilst I do accept that this is all fetish-fiction and at the end of the day it's smut - I like my stuff to at least be grounded in some sense of logistical realism, so people can think "Hmm... that situation might happen if this was real..."

I try anyway, within the bounds of this all being entirely imaginary anyway.

Schrodinger123

Posted by Schrodinger123 1 year ago Report

Yeah, it's no problem Most people won't really try to pick holes and stuff like this. Cause they're just trying tohis kind of stuff gets stuck in my head really, really easily, unfortunately. I mean the most unrealistic part isnt even the preds or lack of reaction its the us or any government caring about people my dude hope your good

pizza3695

Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report

Oh, they care about people they want to care about. Plus the LPP does generate a fair amount of money, since you have to pay to "Opt-Out" after you leave High School. If that revenue stream stopped - they'd care, believe me! XD

Schrodinger123

Posted by Schrodinger123 1 year ago Report

You seem to misunderstand my statement. What I meant is they would simply order. The Predator that he forgot that she was diplomatically immune. Or something like that with the gun held to the back of his head Remember, the government has a monopoly on force Honestly good luck to him if he wants to try to break that