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A quickie about moving to a new place.
It is actually the intro to a longer I have on the back burner.
But I realized it made for a self contained little story on its own.
If it is popular, that could mean I will put focus into finishing the longer story.
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Posted by MentholBreakdown 1 year ago Report
This is really good! I always love casual vore scenarios and this was quite well-written!
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Thank you and glad you got enjoyment out of it.
Casual vore is usually my favorite too. :)
Posted by DancingQueen6281 1 year ago Report
So casual. So hot. Love it.
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Thanks, means a lot to get that from someone who writes great casual stories themselves :)
Posted by Kroton68 1 year ago Report
Well written - I hope you do finish the longer story
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Thank you.
The positive reception the quickie has gotten has definitely given me motivation to try and complete the whole thing. :)
Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report
Would love to see more casual vore with Alice witnessing different situations and settings.
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
It is a story I would like to do too. The plan is to post it in chapters, as Alice has individual episodes in a community that has a much more relaxed attitude towards vore than she is used to from home.
Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report
Sounds great! Can't wait :)
Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report
I really like this very normal, trivialized side of vore but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't left wanting more :) I hope you'll continue the long story ;)
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
I guess that means it works as an introduction. :) Glad you enjoyed it, I am doing my best to give it some more focus.
Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report
Oh this was sweet! I love lil scenes like this :)
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Me too. Trying to weave vore naturally into everyday life is something I really enjoy when writing vore.
Thanks for the kind comment. :)
Posted by BardicLasher 1 year ago Report
Very fun. More please!
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Thanks, I am working on more :)
Posted by Dudebro2092 1 year ago Report
Great tease! I look forward to the rest!
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Happy you think so, doing my best to finish some more of this premise.