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Part of the Problem By RavenRoberts -- Report

Long commission for  TimeToRun who wanted a crime thriller featuring his OC Sara ^///^

Is quite narrative-heavy and was a challenge to write, but I enjoyed it so much and am super proud of how it turned out <3 let me know what you think, and obvs go show TimetoRun some love as well - their art is very, very good >///>



If you enjoy my work and want more/would like to support me, all my links are here~ https://ravenroberts.bio.link/

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bbwlover2809

Posted by bbwlover2809 1 year ago Report

Holy shit was this a blast to read through! I love vore narratives with conspiracy involved. Always makes it such a compelling, heartbreaking but ultimately deeply erotic story that I just couldn’t stop wanting to read on. Definitely will be rereading.

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 1 year ago Report

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! The more story-focused pieces are more difficult to put together, but they're so satisfying when they're done ^///^

bbwlover2809

Posted by bbwlover2809 1 year ago Report

It almost sort of reminds me of the Slitheen from Doctor Who, the episodes as part of the 9th Doctor’s run where they’ve already managed to undermine the government and takeover without lifting a finger. Just that sort of cruel, yet completely lethargic evil that pairs so well with vore.

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 1 year ago Report

Probably no surprise I wanted to be a slitheen when I was little ;w;

bbwlover2809

Posted by bbwlover2809 1 year ago Report

I mean the job opportunities ARE endless. Just have to live with the chronic “bowel issues” ;P

bbwlover2809

Posted by bbwlover2809 4 months ago Report

God, to think I would be back here on this specific piece close to an exact year later, hopped up on the same government vore conspiracy cravings again. To be led back to the masterfully erotic and emotional piece you made here. It could almost be called fateful given I said I’d reread this eventually. And honestly, as much as it makes sense narratively, that last lingering scene with Kiera and Eric, really does harken back straight to one of the scenes in “Aliens in London”. Fantastic and although it was a commission, I think more literature on this universe would be sublime <3

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 4 months ago Report

It makes me really really happy knowing people come back to revisit my work <3 I was thinking about this story recently as well - the setting for my new card game leans very noir and i have a yet unpublished book with a very similar premise

It's the kind of thing that goes so, so well with unchecked predation. I adore~

bbwlover2809

Posted by bbwlover2809 4 months ago Report

Honestly, if the book is as fetishistically erotic as your writings here on Eka’s, I may very well have to see about buying. Your vore works are just too good not to.

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 4 months ago Report

obvs I'll make a big song and dance about it when it's on amazon, but it is available to read on my substar now if you were interested <3 I think it's 9$ upwards gets you access to my whole library

bbwlover2809

Posted by bbwlover2809 4 months ago Report

Yknow what, since it’s Christmas. I may just. Thank you! Could you tell me the title so I could keep an eye out for it?