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Apologies for the gap in my work, life keeps getting in the way of me wanting to sit down and work. I hope this should be satisfactory for the long wait.
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Posted by Barkivious 1 year ago Report
Just realized a minor inconsistency with my writing near the Victoria scene. Apologies, meant to only use the word walking but somehow mistakenly used 'sprinting'.
Posted by Barkivious 1 year ago Report
As a follow up, its beneficial to read my prior two stories to have some understanding.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 1 year ago Report
Had an idea for a story similar to this. ^^
Woman inflating herself with air and water to look hugely prego has an accident while shopping. people rush her to the hospital thinking she’s In labor and don’t listen to her. Female doctor wheels her to the delivery room and also doesn’t listen to her when she flat out admits she’s not really pregnant. Pissed off the woman lets her anger get the better of her and Ub’s the rude doctor as she’s reaching in deep to check her. Afterwards she leaves in an angry huff for her apartment, with the doctor struggling inside.
Posted by Barkivious 1 year ago Report
Not a bad idea at all. I would probably make a few minor changes here and there, but it could be a decent read.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 1 year ago Report
Thank you^^
I’m an idea guy. Good at finding a way forward when your stuck and very eager to give away ideas I’ve cooked up to see what others can do with them!
I’m not a regression or hard vore kind of person.
And that’s mainly because of one key reason...
It ends the fun too early! ^^ why digest or regress when you can keep and enjoy that full feeling for as long as you want?.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 1 year ago Report
This story was great by the way.^^
If I could change or touch on something though, I feel it would have been a little more thrilling if she had already finished unbirthing the doctor by the time her assistant showed up. Like she tries to pretend nothing has happened but the doctors faint shouts or-struggles give it away, Forcing her to take the assistant too.
Posted by Barkivious 1 year ago Report
Thank you so much for the feedback!
Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report
Ooh, fun! I’ve always enjoyed this sort of scene. :)
Posted by Barkivious 1 year ago Report
Big fan of your work, nice to hear you appreciate mine!