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A fun Halloween Tale regarding Abigail Haggsonn, a witch in training trying to establish herself at a new, prestigious academy for all things Dark Arts.

Unfortunately, it seems her familiar - an enormous, ravenous python - has taken it upon himself to devour the everloving heck out of Abigail's roommate, a cute and harmless witch girl who truly doesn't deserve such a horrid fate. Or does she?

A longer one, but please enjoy and review.

Part of an art trade with Stanku! Check out their story here, a fun and well-written tale with delicious vore and peril - check out their gallery if you haven't yet:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/953544

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Aickavon12

Posted by Aickavon12 1 year ago Report

never underestimate a 'layabout'. JUst eat them and get it over with XD

Narrows

Posted by Narrows 1 year ago Report

Indeed! Better safe than…ahm…snake food.

LuridLuncheon

Posted by LuridLuncheon 1 year ago Report

I adored this and would honestly love to see more with this world and characters. The context bits were really fun and interesting and the actual vore was well written and involved my favorite bit of stripping.

Narrows

Posted by Narrows 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it - world building is always my favorite bits of writing, I hope to indeed get around to furthering the adventures of Ms. Haggsonn!

TVSS

Posted by TVSS 1 year ago Report

I'm glad to see you're still as talented as ever. I've missed your stories. I'm delighted to be able to enjoy another nugget from you.

Narrows

Posted by Narrows 1 year ago Report

Great hearing from you - thanks for the kind words. I hope to return to writing vore shorts more consistently once I finish a personal project. Hopefully by the start of the new year!

HulkHogan177013

Posted by HulkHogan177013 1 year ago Report

Wow this is detailed. Feels like a book series and a british one at that. Feels like the kind of book I’d have been obsessed with alongside my burgeoning fetish, bravo

Narrows

Posted by Narrows 1 year ago Report

Much appreciated- I may not be a proper Brit myself but I do adore the aesthetic of their language and expressions! Thank you for the kind words!

Randomdude5

Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report

I gave this story a favorite because of the transparency spell on the snake's stomach. Digestion is my favorite part of vore, and you had it in this story. Transparent stomachs are great, and magic is a good way to make them that way. The Chronal Acceleration Spell speeding up digestion was nice too.

Since I am a suspicious person, I wonder if Abigail put the bloating curse in the bread pudding to excuse Figgs' actions. If she did, the truthing worm, and the investigation would probably get her caught.

Anyways good story. For some reason, there are random spaces in the middle of words. The story makes me wonder if the snake could swallow a willing girl feet first, and swallow air for her, but that probably isn't your style.

Narrows

Posted by Narrows 1 year ago Report

Thank you! A detailed description of digestion was an ask as part of the trade, glad you enjoyed it!
I will admit, however, that willing, nonfatal and feetfirst vore is actually the opposite of my preferred headfirst, fatal and nonwilling vore but I'm really not against any type of vore with female prey.

Randomdude5

Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report

I have a conspiracy theory. The Hagsons and the Haggsonns are the same family. They might have changed their name, and blamed all their misdeeds on the Hagsons, or there was a family spit, and one part of the family changed their last name and put 2 Gs and Ns in it.

To say whether Abigail is a witch or a hag, would need an objective definition to compare her too.

I actually like the idea of headfirst, fatal unwilling vore in this setting if there is a spell, so the girl being eaten can breathe inside Figgs' stomach.

cerealkillerx

Posted by cerealkillerx 1 year ago Report

It’s good to see you back in the saddle my friend! ^^ I’ve sorely missed reading your amazing vore stories and what better way to herald your return than reward us with a deliciously spooky and cautionary tale!

Narrows

Posted by Narrows 1 year ago Report

May be a bit before I’m fully back in the groove - gave myself a deadline for Jan 1st to finish a personal writing project I’ve been slogging through. Still, thank you for the kind words! They’re a big motivator for me to return to the vore grind!

cerealkillerx

Posted by cerealkillerx 1 year ago Report

Anytime! ^^ I think I’ve already asked this before, but I’d certainly would love to give your personal project a read ^^