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Been a while since I posted this series. At some point I plan to get the art of Blake drawn.
But hey here is chapter 3.Now despite how long it ended up being I loved writing it. So many sexy parts, from the forced breast feeding. Lucky Yang! the studying that Ruby and Weiss had to do. Which also I intend for them to go through more Including Blake next time!~ And yes you'll learn what her size is then.
And I hope you all enjoyed this chapter and please comment on what you read. Favorite parts? Parts you wish was expanded on etc.
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Posted by Goldendevil21 1 year ago Report
Do like the tease at the beginning where Yang is bragging about being the biggest boob drider. Is a bit sexy.
Also did enjoy how Yang pointed out that Weiss the dridder seems to enjoy the discomfort of her new form. She is over twenty feet tall and massive. Yet seems like Weiss seems to enjoy shaking and squeezing her body in different ways.
And did enjoy how Oz knows about Driders. They are not a new concept to the world of Remnant but the sizes team RWBY is at now are huge and never happened before. A nice way to make their sexy transformations feel connected to the world.
Also really enjoy how characters say ‘dust’ instead of ‘god.’ That was a great little touch.
And already said this but love the return of The Milk Baloon, Dr. Scarlet. First, love the nickname. Second, find her transformations super sexy. Third, makes sense she is in the scene as they are doing tests on Ruby.
And just love the ending of Ruby forcing her older sister in a horny lust to force her to drink the driders milk. Just love seeing Ruby give in to her desires. Just love reading how Yang’s belly is now the size of Ruby’s abdomen. Really hammering home just how much milk was forced into the blonde.
And a suggestion, recommend you make a space between paragraphs. Helps the reader pay more attention to where they are in the story.