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A small story of Carmesi and Ayako going to the pool
Ayako is an OC of a friend
Okay, time to show the version with images!
I hope you like it... it might have some small grammar mistakes, but the story should be understandable
ALSO... the full ORIGINAL images can be seen here:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/86701628
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Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Lol so they wiped out an entire public pool worth of people . RIP all those unfortunate ones XD the girls are definitey gluttons
Posted by Allissei 1 year ago Report
Hey, the girls need to eat XP
Posted by DrDark7 1 year ago Report
heh nice
Posted by Allissei 1 year ago Report
Yep
Posted by Assimilation 1 year ago Report
I liked this story originally a lot, and the pictures you added for this upload are great!
I am curious, however, about one of your story choices here. You put a self-insert into the story, using your own name, and I assume you find your OC preds sexy... so why did you choose to write Carmesi having sex with Ayako but not with your self-insert?
There's nothing wrong with this, obviously, but I don't think I've ever before seen an author have their sexy OC completely ignore their self-insert.
Posted by Allissei 1 year ago Report
Well, actually, this story wasn't written by me, it was done by the owner of Ayako, so he preferred to see Carmesi have a wild night with Ayako
Posted by Assimilation 1 year ago Report
Oh, that makes a lot more sense. He might have found it weird to write his friend's self-insert having sex with a character, so he had his own self-insert and yours just be bros and play video games together at the end of the story—I think I get it now.