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Melissa does a stream of herself going hunting in the urban jungle.
This premise was a suggestion by a reader and somehow a quickie story just came to me in a few hours.
Gave me a chance to post more Melissa stuff too. :)
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Posted by Voriersparadise 1 year ago Report
Fun little story,i like the casual natrue of it. And the vlog angle was fun!
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Thank you.
Yeah, the vlog was suggested and I thought it kinda made sense for Melissa to do it as a bit of self promotion between movies, to keep public interest.
Posted by BardicLasher 1 year ago Report
Great story!
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Thank you :)
Posted by ryanshowseason3 1 year ago Report
Only one critique. You could separate the disposal section from the weight gain one.
Then your fans of weight gain don't have to miss out because they don't like disposal.
Posted by EloquentOrc 1 year ago Report
Hmmm, I hadn't thought of that, good point.
It would'nt have been too hard to part up the two.
Thanks for the advice.