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Also Known as, "A Gurgling Demise" Full Version. 26.4k words, I added a very noticable cutoff (hopefully!) for where the new stuff starts if you just wanna jump to that. as well, I marked in bold where the graphic digestion as well as scat occurs, so I hope that helps for those who wish to avoid that.
Okay, This was the intended way that this story was meant to be released, not really a part 2 because its all the same story, I just got lazy cuz it was taking so long so I released the 'short' version before.
I hope the finished, final version of the events is to everyones liking, I really tried very hard on this, so I hope it lives up to everyones expectations for the story.
STORY SPOILERS/CREATOR THOUGHTS BELOW:
Even still, I had to cut some things because they were taking to long to write, or I just felt that they were bloating the story. one of those which I don't know how happy I am about is the scene after Ms. Monica listens to Mateo's recorded death. I originally intended for that to be followed by a scene where she calls up Camero and asks her to fill her backside to "pave the way for Mateo" (obviously camero still wouldnt know but thats the reason why she would invite him over) I liked this a lot because that was the one hole I it would have been nice for her to have all three holes of her filled, but alas, it was cut because I didn't want the story to drag. 25k words is already a lot and I feel like with that scene added it could have reached levels where it would be a slog to read through. (maybe more than it already is, I feel like I may have made this second half a bit slower than the first in some areas (shower scene, car scene (though I really love that one!))
Idk, anyways, thank you for reading this far, This is my first completed vore story posted and written by me... ever, So im very curious about feedback and comments. even just a "i liked X aspect" or "i liked it" would be very nice to see lol, anyways enough begging for attention, thank you for reading as always!!
Also important note, even though its not directly said (at least i think, i haven't read this in a while... all characters are over 18. Mateo and Camero are graduate students that are both 23yo, and Monica is 35)
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Posted by Volunteer 1 year ago Report
HEY, so sorry for anybody who read so far, I accidentally just... forgot to write the final masturbation scene in Angela's bedroom, literally the note is still in the story i just never wrote it, I'm re-writing it right now hopefully I can fix it soon sorry again!
Posted by Volunteer 1 year ago Report
okay! its fixed now, the full story now in all its glory, I hope I didn't go to overboard with it. i was trying to top the previous sex scene with Camero, and I think that I accomplished that... hopefully you all like it!
Posted by jak123 1 year ago Report
This was an awesome story i loved it
Posted by Volunteer 1 year ago Report
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! I probably won't do one like this for a while again, but I'm seriously glad you enjoyed it. also, I just updated this story actually, If you read it before, the final masturbation scene before Ms. Monica goes to sleep is very... underwhelming, this is because I legitimately forgot to write it lmao. It is fixed now though, so If you ever re-read the story and find that part different, now you know why!
Posted by Grec0R0man 1 year ago Report
Ooo... I do love a cruel ending at times. This was excellent! I cannot simply wait to see what else you are cooking up ;)
How are you liking the RTF format?
Posted by Volunteer 1 year ago Report
Thank you! yes, delightfully cruel, I loved going wild and just making Angela turn into a sadistic power hungry woman as she continued to make Mateo's life hell.
Still, I tried to make it so that there wasnt too much time to feel bad for the prey, obviously, being digested is horrible, but i focused more on the experience from Ms. Monica's perspective, which was one of pleasure, (just a personal gripe, but I sometimes get turned off of a story cuz the digestion is to overly... gruesome, not on a physical level but emotional one, Idk i guess when the prey is like breaking down in tears and giving up It sometimes is just a little to much for me personally. Credit to the writers since they really personalize and make you like the prey, but it just makes me sad when they get a painful, long digestion. I guess that makes my stories more unrealistic in a way but... what can you do? to each there own!
also, I just want to warn you, my next story is most definitely going to be a very wholesome, heartwarming, (hopefully) tear-jerking gentle gts story, not very much sexy times lol. but I really hope you enjoy it all the same, I've been loving writing it. Same with the RTF format, thank you so much for telling me about it, It literally makes my stories soooo much better to read thank you. I was gonna upload a PDF version but I honestly don't even think it is necessary thanks to RTF looking so good even on PC!
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
oh good lord . amazing . long with a great pay off
Posted by Volunteer 1 year ago Report
Thank you!! yeah this is the longest story/thing ive ever written, I'm glad you liked it, I really pushed hard to complete it!
Posted by DrPerve 1 year ago Report
This is so fucking good! Great story and its well written!
Posted by Volunteer 1 year ago Report
Thank you! seriously that makes me really happy that you enjoyed my story, it was really fun to write and read after i finished it. If I ever do another fetish story I might have to bring Ms. Monica along for another ride cuz man she is just my favorite type of pred. thank you again!
Posted by AnAccount 1 year ago Report
I mean the story has almost everything you could want. Loved it!
Posted by Volunteer 1 year ago Report
Thank you! Im glad you liked it! It was a blast to write, it is basically a compilation of everything I personally love in vore stories, so it was really a joy to write it as well. Thanks!
Posted by TheTinyWriter 9 months ago Report
Usually I don’t really read stories like this one but I thought it was pretty good. I liked the focus on Ms. Monica’s experiences primarily and how they made her feel, while still keeping enough of the prey’s point of view to make it more vivid and to capture what exactly Ms. Monica wants.
Posted by Volunteer 9 months ago Report
First off, sorry for the late response! Secondly, Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, it is quite a hefty story, I focused on Monica's perspective because well... a lot of times i find myself feeling bad for the tinies if they are the main focus lol
thats why i mostly made Mateo angry, rather than sad, depressed, or scared when i DID show his side. Monica's experience as a pred is more what I am looking for in cruel pred scenarios.
Posted by TheTinyWriter 9 months ago Report
No worries! And you’re welcome. I think it also makes sense because those are the more intense feelings you wanted to concentrate on. Dividing it would definitely not give the same impact.
And absolutely yeah. Bring too empathetic I think would’ve killed a lot of the mood.