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Dropoff <3 (Rough Draft Comic) By foxyoreos -- Report

This is very early and there's a ★LOT★ to do, this is only the writing and layout and rough draft.

I think I'm going to split the actual finished comic into multiple images.

I've gotten pawsitive reactions to the few scat pieces I've done before, so I wanted to do something a little more involved <3 I know this is pawbably a little tough to read ;w; but I think the layout came out really good so I couldn't resist sharing it X3 and it should still be pawsible to get the general gist of where it's going. This is the same fox from the other fox comic I've done:

★ Dumb Bun: https://aryion.com/g4/view/968140

He's a wittle rascal fox, he likes to do some teasing and to show the bunnies that he catches a good time before digesting them~

No timeline on when I'll be done with it or if I'll release it all at once or release one panel at a time. That'll depend on my schedule and the ADHD X3

There are a lot of tags in this one, so feel free to suggest if I've forgotten about something :3

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waffleboi

Posted by waffleboi 1 year ago Report

This premise is reallly fun. :3

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 1 year ago Report

:3c I think the fox in this comic figured out a while ago that it's easier and more fun to transport your prey around if you just knot them as soon as you catch them. And if that leads to them occasionally having a better view of where they're going to end up, that's just an added benefit. There's lots that you can do with a knotted prey~

And it's not like the prey is complaining! Er, well, okay they are complaining quite a lot, they're struggling and crying pretty hard back there... But whatever, prey do that anyways X3

kitty122

Posted by kitty122 1 year ago Report

Ooooh I love this so far! Can't wait to see how it turns out ;3

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 1 year ago Report

<3 I don't have a timeline for it, but I am excited to try and finish this comic up, I'm really happy with how the draft layout came out.

Speedyblupi

Posted by Speedyblupi 1 year ago Report

I absolutely love this concept, of a predator shitting out their last prey while they fuck their next one.
I've also never seen it executed quite like this.

I think the scene with the eyes looking through the window is a bit confusing (I'm not sure what it's supposed to represent) but still hot.

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 1 year ago Report

Thanks so much!! :3 I was pretty excited about this idea, I really like the general vibe this fox has started developing, he's just a very very teasey pred <3

There's a few different panels I know I'll definitely need to revise for the final version, the eyes being one of them. :3 It's meant to be a focus on just the poop, with the poop piling up on the panel itself and just a cutaway of the bunny's eyes watching it, since if I drew the bunny normally for that scene their head would be too low down and their eyes wouldn't be as visible. But I think it still comes across as a little confusing. I'll have to play with a few different versions of it, pawsibly try something else. Color and playing with the shapes of the borders might help too, I'll figure that out once I start inking it X3

JadeTheDeer

Posted by JadeTheDeer 1 year ago Report

amazing!!

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 1 year ago Report

Thanks! <3 I'm hoping the finished version will come out well.

Darkthefox

Posted by Darkthefox 7 months ago Report

I hope you come back to this one. I love it when preds give their prey a preview of their future and he is so nonchalant about it.

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 7 months ago Report

No pawmisses on when I'll finish and it will come out, but I am actively working on it (even got it open on stream right now X3)

Darkthefox

Posted by Darkthefox 7 months ago Report

Oh darn, I wish I could watch right now.

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 7 months ago Report

It's fine if you don't have or want to answer, but what are good stream times for you? I've been trying to get more data about when different segments of followers would like to see streams, it's been hard to figure out what time zones different fluffers are in.

Darkthefox

Posted by Darkthefox 7 months ago Report

You're stream times are usually perfect for me but tonight I wanted to hangout with my long distance boyfriend who doesn't get a lot of free time.

foxyoreos

Posted by foxyoreos 7 months ago Report

totally understandable <3

And no worries, if you do hop into a future stream just let me know in the chat and if I can I'll do a drawing session on this comic <3

Darkthefox

Posted by Darkthefox 7 months ago Report

Ok I'll totally ask the next time I drop in. :)