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Beware of Hungry Waitresses! By DreamEater -- Report

Are you ready for another DreamEater Story?

Of course you are! Well, this one features our lovely little waitress, Coco Flowers, as she finishes another shift at the Dream Diner. After several hours of servicing rude customers and hungry patrons, she's ready to clock-out for some much needed rest. However, one of the customers seems to have taken a liking to the bubbly young employee, and things quickly get out of hand as a result...

It's been a while since I've written about Coco Flowers! I hope you enjoy the direction that I'm going in with her character!

Also, this story features Coco and Natasha from the "Dream State Bullies" series! I hope you enjoy their unusual dynamic!

If you want to read the last story within this series, check out "Gaslight, Gatekeep, Girlboss <3" here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/940453

The thumbnail was made with Stablediffusion (I am not an artist nor pretend to be)

Also, if you want a direct link to the thumbnail, click here:https://www.deviantart.com/dreameater-at-da/art/Coco-the-Waitress-1023615981

All characters are age 18+

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You guys are awesome and your many interactions and insights with my work keeps me writing free of charge!

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holderplace12337

Posted by holderplace12337 1 year ago Report

This is really good, keep up the amazing work!

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I’m glad that you like Coco and all of her shenanigans~

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Wow ok , so normally I don’t really have anyone who I hope gets eaten . Your stories are great but given the setting you’ve created it’s hard to route for anyone especially since I’m not sure if they’ll actually live . But this time you got me. I didn’t know who to route for . At one point I liked Shelly too because she’s a crazy pred , she would’ve made for a great possessive pred . But this entire this was just. Wow if you have a list of game overs you wanna do , this has to be on that list for sure . This is perfect for one

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Also seems like cocos personality has taken a major shift . She’s a lot less of a bully and more of a nice person here.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Yea, Coco totally believes that she is a nice person! ^_^

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Lol despite her killing her previous best friend due to a misunderstanding

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Hmmm…what was her predatory ability called, again? I wonder what it does~

Heartfullartfull

Posted by Heartfullartfull 1 year ago Report

I liked this one a lot! Coco is a character I like lot she has a lot of bratty qualities but also is still nice. I love her dynamic with Natasha, honestly I do like the hints of a possible relationship as well. They compliment each other well, ones more prey with a lot of techniques for keeping prey down, the other is more pred and is more confident and aware of preds but not strong when eaten. I like this!
Also I like how Coco has a the bigger butt and Natasha had the bigger bust, they both want what the other has, or at least they like the size the other has, another great story with my favorite bratty characters from you!

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Haha, you do love the brats, huh? Well there’s plenty in Dreamville. They’re all bratty in different ways~

Heartfullartfull

Posted by Heartfullartfull 1 year ago Report

What can I say, you write these characters so well I can't help but love em! I look forward to whoever is getting a story next these folks Dreamville get up to some crazy stuff!

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I’m glad that you like them! I try to make the characters enjoyable to read about, and I appreciate the feedback~

Vrwrite

Posted by Vrwrite 1 year ago Report

Great story as always, a ton of fun and some nice character interactions, I do have question, do you ever think you may do a mass vore story or do you feel more comfortable leaving it up to a few prey at a time.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Mass vore is a fun thought, but I’ve always been within the school of thought that it’s hard to create a mass vore story that has meaningful character interactions. I’m open to the idea though~

Vrwrite

Posted by Vrwrite 1 year ago Report

I did have an idea for a mass vore story involving you character Emma, since her friend is trying to bring out her confidence and her predatory nature, she decided to take her to a small college party to show off and hunt, but things may go a bit out of hand.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Hmmm… I’ll consider something like that! Emma does need another story~

Vrwrite

Posted by Vrwrite 1 year ago Report

Thanks for listening to my idea.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thank you for the love~

Segundoetapa

Posted by Segundoetapa 1 year ago Report

Wow might be my favorite one so far, lots of character development and action packed to boot. Natasha isn’t so bad after all it seems. Definitely love to see these close calls that could pivot the story ~

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks, I feel like I’m getting the hang on developing characters and writing scenes! Thank you for your support!

pepesz2205

Posted by pepesz2205 1 year ago Report

I really liked this story, I always like to see Coco and Natasha, very good job as always, this should definitely have an alternative ending in the future.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it!

hdial002

Posted by hdial002 1 year ago Report

Are you gonna make an alt of this

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report

Maybe! If the motivation hits~

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 9 months ago Report

What about them?

Theonewhooverseesall

Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 9 months ago Report

Hey how about you make an alt where coco ate shelly instead of waking her up