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Waterpark Dilemma By VoidInVoid -- Report

Something, something, slippery when wet. I wrote most of this while I was very tired, and I turned off spellcheck since I was getting tired of adding all my proper nouns to the dictionary; if there's any spelling errors, there's your reasons why.

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VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 1 year ago Report

If anyone can guess the naming convention, I will write a sequel.

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 1 year ago Report

For the characters, I mean, not the planet.

NamiOkami

Posted by NamiOkami 1 year ago Report

Is it that all the characters names are different kinds of cheeses? Like Bri is brie, edda is cheddar, Menta is pimento.

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 1 year ago Report

You got it. Bri is Brie, and began unintentionally, so she set the standard once I realized. Rica is American; Migia is Parmigiano Reggiano (Parmesan); Fe is feta; Coti is cotija; Menta is Emmentaler; Edda- is cheddar; Hava is havarti; Okilly is Imokilly Regato; Gama is gamalost; and Bryn is Bryndza. I made an effort to use cheeses from different countries.

NamiOkami

Posted by NamiOkami 1 year ago Report

Very cool!

stilluncomfortable

Posted by stilluncomfortable 7 months ago Report

Super hot and fun story! Altho a bit curious won't the people inside Rica get digested?

And also what happened to Edda? Who was the person that put on the bikini with her inside?

VoidInVoid

Posted by VoidInVoid 7 months ago Report

What I have planned for whenever I get to finishing the sequel, those inside Rica will still be alive.
As far as Edda goes, that was Bryn. The latter's "phantom sensation of occupation" was a joke on the fact that Edda was actually inside of her.

stilluncomfortable

Posted by stilluncomfortable 7 months ago Report

Oooh ok thank you for explaining! And super looking forward to the sequel!

stilluncomfortable

Posted by stilluncomfortable 7 months ago Report

Oooh ok thank you for explaining! And super looking forward to the sequel!