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Consider It A Promise By LivesInAStomach -- Report

She watched the fluid and pulp drain out of the stomach in sputtering, uneven gurgles. It reminded Dulce of pulling the plug of a bathtub and staying inside as the water flowed away.

Dulce couldn’t help but admit this whole experience got her terribly flustered with the thrill of it. To think that this would happen every week. She felt like a lucky girl.


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Another chapter! Things really start getting interesting in the story, now. All of the preparation is done, all of the work has been completed. And now Dulce's curled up in that stomach! She has officially gotten exactly what she wanted all along. Such an eventful day, and it was only day one! Eighty-nine more to go.

As always, this story should be good enough to read on its own, but I highly recommend checking out the other parts in the series! The slow build-up and anticipation is something I'm very fond of.

The text of this story was directly taken from a roleplay with  Observance. The text has been edited for length, clarity, and overall narrative appeal.

(9,129 Words)

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Further Reading
{Ch. 1} I'm Extra Lucky
{Ch. 2} We Can Be The First
{Ch. 3} (You Are Here!) Consider It A Promise
{Ch. 4} What We Both Wanted
{Ch. 5} The One Who Earned Her Name
... and more

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Matteo42

Posted by Matteo42 1 year ago Report

Incredible work, as always ^^ I wonder how many of Shesa's friends Dulce will get to meet, and vice-versa.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 1 year ago Report

Living with someone for 90 days is a long time to go without introducing your friends! I bet as time goes on we'll meet more and more new faces.

Thanks so much for reading and enjoying!

Observance

Posted by Observance 1 year ago Report

Every time one of these comes out, I get more excited to see what everyone thinks of what'll happen next. Especially now that the timer has started!

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 1 year ago Report

The real story has finally begun! No more set-up!

Alexwwpyro

Posted by Alexwwpyro 1 year ago Report

Hope it becomes permanent

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 1 year ago Report

You said the same thing on another chapter! Guess I know what you're thinking about.

XeNO333

Posted by XeNO333 1 year ago Report

woah. this is so good, great.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 1 year ago Report

Super glad you enjoyed!!

Grimorva

Posted by Grimorva 1 year ago Report

This story captured my attention and emotions in a way I can't quite describe. There's not many writers that can get away with creating a story of this nature and having it be this much fun to read. You really are something else, and I love Dulce and Shesa too <3

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 1 year ago Report

If you liked this chapter that much, I can't wait for you to read what happens next <3