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Story length: 14001 words
The tale of one girl’s experience in therapy, trying to overcome her predatory urges as she faces temptation, relapse, and abuse
This is by far the most ambitious story I’ve made so far. This is my first attempt at a heftier story with a deeper plot and more of a structure with plenty of vore still interspersed throughout. I mean, look at that length, I don’t think I’ve gone near that before. I’m proud of it, I think I cooked here. Please, let me know what you think because, again, this is a first for me and I want to know if the effort paid off
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Posted by Tyuqa 1 year ago Report
This is really great! Super interesting take on the sort of self fulfilling prophecy of pathologizing those with mental illnesses. It was both very evocative and delightfully kinky. It never ceases to amaze me when bullies harrass someone for being possibly violent, and then are surprised when they face violent retaliation.
Posted by Toxix 1 year ago Report
Thankyou
Posted by Trying124 1 year ago Report
think you definitely cooked here, I think that you Portray the character beautifully, and you give them real depth, there's a few things that from personal preference I'm not the biggest fan of, but that's not a stylistic point, that's a different Kink, side of things.
I would love to see more like this, and it's a really terrific idea. Hope you keep up the good work!
Posted by Toxix 1 year ago Report
Thanks
Posted by dhjura 2 months ago Report
This is really good!! You really did cook
Posted by JustAStargazer 3 weeks ago Report
Stand proud, you can cook. This was enthralling, I loved the journey we took with Grace and saw her fall as her world pushed her. It’s a sad situation for most all involved and creates an interesting world. Gj dude
Posted by Toxix 3 weeks ago Report
Cheers. This is still probably my favourite standalone story I’ve done. It’s fun to present vore in a more realistic setting. It’s tragic, it’s unfair, and it’s a sickness
Posted by JustAStargazer 3 weeks ago Report
Indeed. I see why you’re proud of it and rightfully so. Tragic is the perfect word for it. Many of my favorite vore moments come from tragedy. It’s such a darkly wonderful thing to see things like that transpire.