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Continuation of Connections
Check the main series from TheDragonBoy and x9comega.
aryion.com/g4/view/569713
https://www.deviantart.com/thedragonboy/gallery/71581721/how-not-to-become-lunch
This Spinoff is not Canon.
If anyone has constructive criticism, I would gladly hear it.
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Posted by Skion 1 year ago Report
Not gonna lie... I'm caught off-guard that this is heading towards a bad ending; I was expecting the beginning of the end for the group.
Or maybe this will get there soon enough; and a glimmer of hope will shine on the boy? Questions, questions.
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
Taking away glimmers of hope in stories makes the characters threatened. That means the readers would also feel it
Posted by Skion 1 year ago Report
Aye, aye. So long as it's not overdone it's perfectly fine; I've read stories where it starts going down, and it's a downhill spiral: With one side completely powerless (to the point that all efforts fail just to give the story a conclusion) rather than letting the character's (strengths/intellect/slyness) shine.
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
noted