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Roger and Ester examine their haul from the Pit of Despair's chamber seven, then Roger finds that Ester has some interesting views on 'control.'

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Morphy

Posted by Morphy 1 year ago Report

If he's got more incoming power than outgoing, he might want to think on expanding the lair. He still hasn't cracked plumbing. Well, I mean he's certainly figured out *her* plumbing, just not modern stuff for showers.

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 1 year ago Report

He should see about some "interesting" enchantments for personal gear Ester can keep in her bedroom. Going by her voiced choices a rope of entanglement (with safewords!) sounds like an obvious one. ;3

(Can't help but think of all the fetishy stuff from Marloweny's Size Isn't A Big Deal)

Gaiaalexf

Posted by Gaiaalexf 1 year ago Report

I'm not usually one to like or read mind control stuff, but having read up to here I can say you definitely wrote it well.
Definitely keeping an eye on this series as it continues as I really like its story so far.

Gimlet

Posted by Gimlet 1 year ago Report

Honestly, I'm not that much into it either. Often more as a point against it (or at least the MC is against it) but it sort of happened during this as I was considering what a dungeon creature really was in all this and how they'd interact with the dungeon itself.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 1 year ago Report

I'm looking forward to more of this series, both the world building and overall plot, and the vore scenes that appeared rather suddenly. Though I would like to ask, is there a particular site or forum that served as the bulk inspiration for this reincarnated as a dungeon core idea? I've seen stories of the sort before, but have never been able to figure out where they come from, or how to find more of them.

Gimlet

Posted by Gimlet 1 year ago Report

I was definitely 'inspired' not any real take on them, but both on Royal Road and SpaceBattles there are a few I've read over the years. On SB I' reccomend 'There is no epic loot here, only puns(dungeon)' though that tale is very different from this one :)