Posted by Karbo 15 years ago Report

Somehow I knew the answer XD

That was a nice story, your writting is excellent ! ^_^

Posted by Fidel2323 15 years ago Report

better than the first part^^
i think it is a little bit cruel, that milly didnt eat julie, cause all her friends are in milly.
But it is a good ending, it shows, that humans are in felarya are only food...
three thumbs up :D

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you both very much!

Milly doesn't see it as cruel. She had a guest, so she fed her guest. To her, that was just normal and polite. (Of course, it's cruel from poor Julie's perspective, but as you say, to most Felaryans, humans are simply food...)

Posted by naruto7568426 14 years ago Report

Wow...=) This is pretty good!

I feel a little sorry for Julie and her friends...But i'm happy to see the preds are eating well! I'm also glad to see Crisis in one of your stories! It's not to often I see her around. Have you written any other stories about Crisis? Also, I hope this isn't personal...(Just a side note.) How many stories have you written in all?

Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report

Thanks! Crisis appears in a few of my stories... I've written over 30 stories now. They're all available here: http://aryion.com/g3/showgallery.php?id=161539 .

Posted by oishi1 12 years ago Report

Very well done. when I was seeing Guarav's name I kept thinking about Gruyeres (the cheese)

Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report

Thanks.

Posted by Justin Bailey 8 years ago Report

Continuing from my comment on part 1...

I still don't even know what to say my reaction is to this. You made getting eaten as frightening as it should realistically be. I thought I liked that, but now I just feel unnerved and somewhat traumatized.

Don't get me wrong though, that's not criticism; that's just my reaction. As usual, this was well written (I jump around without keeping track, so I don't know how it compares stylistically and content-wise with later stuff you've written).

But dang, I feel like I need a hug now. I've had a vore fetish for 20+ years and I don't even want to think about it now. xP

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Ouch; I didn't intend it to be traumatic… Bear in mind, this is something I wrote seven years ago. I don't think many of my stories focus quite so intensely on the prey's experience. Or on such a level of "realism".

Still, this did set the grounds for aspects of Milly's personality. The disconnect between her own perspective and the perspectives of her food. Her attempts to be friendly and kind towards the humans she eats, and her disappointment at their lack of positive response.

Posted by Justin Bailey 8 years ago Report

Hehe, it's alright, I'll get over it. I guess I just ended up caring more about the prey than usual - I've probably been desensitized (or, wait, sensitized? Grown unaccustomed to emotional investment in characters) by looking at images and not reading anything for too long. I think what I usually do is distance myself as the observer or mentally substitute myself in for the prey, but in this case the prey was quite well developed and I ended up "experiencing" everything from their perspective, which was one of fear and sadness.

I do like Milly's personality. :) In the case of this story, I actually felt like her kindness made the whole situation more terrifying in a way because it was a disconnect from what you'd expect from a man-eating "monster", and since it gave the prey hope only to have that hope crushed. And she was trustworthy - a good trait - but that also meant that when she says she's not letting you go, you can believe it.

Another possibility: I've been getting over the flu and also suffer from depression and my emotions were just out of whack last night. :P

Anyway, thanks for the comment and all your stories. :)

Posted by lynne 7 years ago Report

I kind of wish you hadn't developed the prey's characters so well. Still great though!

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I've tended to do that in a number of stories. I make the prey characters into genuine people, rather than just forgettable disposable items. Not always, though; I've also written some 'guilt-free' vore where readers don't need to feel for the prey. ;)

Thanks!