Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Burp M/F Same Size Belch Story Belching Female Prey Burping Male Pred dog boy Quick Digestion Femboy Pred fish girl Genshin Impact gorou sangonomiya kokomi Kokomi Sangonomiya Powerplay gorou (genshin impact)
This one's a little shorter than usual, buuuut well,, I've fallen into the male pred rabbithole, dear lord, help me
by the wayy, offer still stands, reach out to me on Discord if you wanna roleplay or just talk vore stuff! :] ( sadiefart#5205 )
RexLou - 2 years ago
Fun and charming vore fic for sure. I really like how quick and instant the vore was and how Gorou never really lingered on his meal in any regard.
Rahskan - 2 years ago
Finally gorou pred ! Awesome story ! Hope to see more of it with some weight gain or disposal if there's a next time !
Boteruct - 2 years ago
Ahhh, this is great!! Love post digestion belches too~
AphWishes - 2 years ago
The male pred rabbit hole is the correct rabbit hole
Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Burp M/F Same Size Story Female Prey Burping Male Pred Xiao burping up objects Genshin Impact Hu Tao
wake up babe eka's user cle0 posts after a million months....
this time, silly plot because i love xiao pred and i think he deserves more love on here :((((((
anywayy, i'm in desperate need of new vore friends, sooo feel free to add me on discord ( sadiefart#5205 ) :]
Cle0 - 2 years ago
YEAA THE BOYYYY..... LITTLE GUY
awhaynq - 2 years ago
Goodbye why did that translate automatically i meant to say that i love this
awhaynq - 2 years ago
XIAO AAAAA VOLIM GA
OrangeCircles - 2 years ago
Your savior, a Xiao vore artist.
AphWishes - 2 years ago
Xiao is amazing I love this
Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Pokemon Soft Vore Human Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Unwilling Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred Burping Onomatopoeia burping up clothes Tall Girl Tall Predator Juliana short prey Semi-casual Vore Pokemon Scarlet and Violet Nemona Juliana (Pokémon)
ok soo, i started playing pokemon violet today and holy shit i fucking love nemona, gay icon i don't care
i might've gotten her character wrong since i've only just reached uva academy but i really wanted to write a story for her soo..... yea!
i might write more pokemon stories as i progress on with the game, so, feel free to let me know if there's anyone you'd like to see me make a story for :]
RexLou - 2 years ago
Really good fic right down to the thumbnail! I really like how quick and causal Nemona was with putting Juliana away and how she clearly expected to get away with this. I really enjoy your choice of thumbnail as well as silly as that might seem, Nemona looking down at the reader is just the perfect way to set the tone...
Lipodem - 2 years ago
Grusha being a snowboarder does a lot for me too. I might be in denial, but I want to think it's not all that weird.
Cle0 - 2 years ago
I'll keep that in mind! There's plenty of scenes I could do with Grusha, so thank you! Him being a snowboarder makes him 10x more attractive for some weird reason.
Lipodem - 2 years ago
It's tough! This generation has the strongest lineup of characters, so they haven't made it easy. However, if the alternative is a wheel spin, I'd have to suggest Grusha! Not necessarily because I think he'd make for a better pred than Rika, but because I have what I affectionately refer to as "best boy bias.".
Cle0 - 2 years ago
I really can't choose who to write my next story about, the game gave us such a wonderful cast that is unmatched by pretty much the rest of the franchise and the fact that they all make great preds only makes it harder to choose ahaha.. At this point, I may as well just resort to spinning a wheel.
Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Burp Same Size F/? Lesbian Unwilling Prey Female Pred Burping Onomatopoeia Casual Unknown prey gamer Stomach Noises Casual vore lesbian romance Casual predator Gamer girl burping up objects gamer pred Genshin Impact Raiden Ei Yae Miko Raiden Shogun
woah.. i'm actually posting and it's not 500000 months after my last post ??? damn
anyway just wanted to write loser ei lmao, plus i did also want to get back into genshin so uh, here it is
as always, feedback is very much appreciated! feel free to suggest characters for upcoming stories
Silversoul2773 - 2 years ago
Please i love soo much Ei can you do another part of her? Maybe where whe can read about when she eat her pred
BroTato - 2 years ago
Gamer chow might ve lucky too lol
He's in a waifu sandwich
Cle0 - 2 years ago
mm, good point. although the main reason i went with ei and yae was just because i really wanted to write ei lol, i also wanted to write a gamer pred and that wouldn't really fit in the genshin setting unfortunately
Cle0 - 2 years ago
thank you! i always look forward to seeing your comments
NotMax - 2 years ago
Great story, especially loved the burp with the glasses. Though I don't know why this is a genshin story when it's not genshin's setting. I feel this would've worked well with either different characters with a similar dynamics or even writing up some original characters made to fit this scenario and dynamic perfectly.
Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Belch Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred fatal digestion Burping Onomatopoeia annoyed pred Burping out object chainsaw man Kobeni Higashiyama Power (Chainsaw Man)
ookayy, so, i'm back with another story! i know this one's a little short, but i should be releasing longer stories soon, unless i go on another 3 months long hiatus lol
i've watched the chainsaw man opening like a million times by now and i love the cinema scene so i had to write this story, even if i probably didn't get the character personalities all that well.. let me know if anyone likes this story and i might write more chainsaw man stuff!
feel free to comment...
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Cle0 - 2 years ago
i had no idea you could even see that lol, i just suck at naming my docs ahah,, but thank you! you should get into chainsaw man, with the anime coming out, it's a great opportunity to do so!
Quartersnake - 2 years ago
Short and sweet! Gosh, I need to get into Chainsaw Man... Also, I like the name on this file, it's enigmatic and makes NO sense. So powerful. mmm walmart 02...
...wait i figured it out after i wrote it out
thedark123star - 2 years ago
i feel bad for the pred if they eat Power.i learned that she never showers
Cle0 - 2 years ago
just another day in the chainsaw man universe
Runbot - 2 years ago
Everyone in the cinema is like " This is normal."
Two shitheads, got what they deserved.
Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Human Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Skull Unwilling Prey Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred fatal digestion Human Pred Burping Onomatopoeia Cruel Pred post-apocalyptic the last of us The last of us 2 Abby Anderson Ellie (The Last of Us) Ellie Williams
soo uhh unfortunately i'm not dead yet andd i come back again with a tlou story!
i'm not expecting this to get many views at all, just wrote this for fun because the last of us vore is way too underrated and underused, plus i love Abby, so, yea, i hope i did her justice lol
i plan on eventually getting back to genshin, probably gonna write a nilou prey story when she comes out since i love bullying my favorite girls soo, yup..
Cle0 - 2 years ago
thanks! a day later, i kinda regret writing this story lol, but hopefully i'll post something more interesting soon
Quartersnake - 2 years ago
Not particularly a fan of tlou, but hey, I can still appreciate good writing! Always cool to see you return, even if it's kinda random.
Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Unwilling Story Willing Pred Female Prey Female Pred Burping Onomatopoeia Accidental digestion burping in face Genshin Impact Lumine Ganyu yanfei
heeelloo so i'm actually still not dead!
i had the sudden urge to write and since my newest obsession is yanfei, i had to write a story for her, of course! i believe she's far too underrated and deserves much more content on this site,, i also love writing her despite how inaccurate i am!
might go on another hiatus after this, but i probably won't! you can most likely expect to see a vore day fic from me unless i end up being lazy,, feel free to request ideas for...
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WindSnipe - 2 years ago
Yanfei my QUEEN
Cle0 - 2 years ago
Thank you for the idea! Yelan's a very interesting case and someone that I'm unsure if I can write very well, but I don't doubt that Yanfei and Yelan would work well together in a future scenario.
I don't really have any reason for making the gastric noises lime green, but I generally just associate green and gas together in most cases. Although I will consider changing it to the predator's color scheme in the future, I appreciate the suggestion!
Fatedmeal - 2 years ago
Glad to see that a character from Genshin Impact was able to inspire you to write a story. I’m on my own timeline to return from a hiatus, so I understand the sentiments. I’ve really been into Kuki Shinobu as a possible predator. There definitely isn’t enough vore content of her on this site yet. Although I have other stories that I have to write before I can get to writing a narrative focused on her.
Kind of curious as to what led you to choose “lime green” for the gastric noises. I might have used a color shade that coincided with Yanfei’s color scheme. Otherwise, it was a splendid story.
Not sure what you have planned for your next story, and I don’t want to constrain your thought process, but here is some “prey” for thought. According to in-game lore Yelan is a risk-taker. She is someone who enjoys pain and has been to clinics to heal wounds with tonics that are slightly painful in several different disguises. (To not arouse suspicion that she has been doing this somewhat intentionally). An interesting fact since Yelan has been depicted as very dominant in every other material so far. When in reality she is a bit of a switch. Could be a nice stepping stone for Yanfei or any other vore narrative you have in mind.
Cle0 - 2 years ago
thank you for the feedback! :) I always enjoy reading your comments. I might end up giving Yanfei more snacks in the future!
Cle0 - 2 years ago
thank you for the feedback! :) I always enjoy reading your comments. I might end up giving Yanfei more snacks in the future!
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Belly F/F Same Size F/? Fatal Unwilling Lesbian Unwilling Prey Female Prey Female Pred teasing f/multiple Unknown prey lesbian romance Multiple Preys Teasing Pred Genshin Impact Hu Tao yanfei
heyy, i'm back! hopefully i'll upload more, but i was just in the mood to write hu tao pred,, so i did! it's a modern verse, so there's cars and all.. well, hope you enjoyed the fic!
i might expand on it in the future, but who knows, i just thought it was fun! it's a little rushed and all, without digestion or burping... which i pretty much always do, but maybe next time i'll do more of it
just like usual, feedback is really appreciated and i would love to read any...
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Ninnin661 - 3 years ago
Hu Tao going to a casino just works so well. Neat idea.
Quartersnake - 3 years ago
Very excited to see you back! I absolutely adore Hu Tao, so I was very excited to see the thumbnail, and twice as excited when I saw you were the author! I'm disappointed at the lack of digestion and burping, but evem if it's missing those, what IS here is excellent stuff. I'm not a fan of multiple prey, usually, but I enjoyed this.
Rhaile579 - 3 years ago
Hu Tao beloved...
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Human Chubby Digestion F/F Burp F/? Belch Story Unwilling Prey Implied Vore Willing Pred Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred Burping Cruel Pred unsuspecting prey smug pred burping up items Burping up skull Genshin Impact Paimon Lumine Lisa Minci Jean Gunnhildr Sucrose
woo i finally posted again,, the second to last part to this lumine series thing! i have a really cool idea for the last part, so yeaa, be exicted!
this is probably my longest fic so far and i kind of like it! feel free to give me some feedback in the comments since yea, i fucking love feedbackkk
also i've been craving some interaction, so hmu on discord! my user's polar#5205 and i don't bite ;)
VertGreenHeart - 2 years ago
Ignore my criticism this is a damn good story but if you want to read it go for it.
in a world of Vore it's possible but I see Lumine being a kind/snarky pred to Sucrose.
it's a T rated game so most likely Lumine would've been cutt off before finishing the F bomb.
Quartersnake - 3 years ago
Loving this series, excited to see what Lumine gets up to next! Especially liked the Lisa cameo, too. Short, sweet, and hardly interrupted the story!
Cle0 - 3 years ago
i get what you mean yea, i feel like lumine is a kind of character who you can choose what personality they have since she has very little canon personality, however i get what you're trying to say, thank you for pointing it out :)
NotMax - 3 years ago
Good scenario, but I feel like you're losing the character of Lumine more and more. She doesnt consider eating Paimon because "she has a good heart", does the same not apply to Sucrose? Plus I really cant see genshin characters saying "what the fuck", lol
the flower breather extinction
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Human Digestion Burp Same Size Fatal Belch Unwilling Belching Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred Burping Cruel Pred Fast Digestion burping up clothes burping up items burping up objects Burping up skull Demon Slayer Kimetsu no Yaiba Kanao Tsuyuri Mitsuri Kanroji
woo, i'm back from the dead! this timeee, it's a demon slayer story! god how much i wish there was more demon slayer content, it's got a bunch of cool preds! just like mitsuri herself,, welp, excuse the horrible title, i had absolutely no idea how to name this fic heh
might make a mitsuri series? buuut i also want to make a story about a very special demon that's getting animated soon ;]
NotMax - 3 years ago
Love seeing a pred go from reluctant to more and more gluttonous. Good stuff!
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Digestion Burp Same Size F/? Fatal Belch Story Belching Female Pred Multiple Preds fatal digestion Human Pred Burping Onomatopoeia Unknown prey Slime prey F/slime written work Genshin Impact Paimon Lumine
woo, part 2 to the lumine fic!! i actually plan to expand this series quite a lot soo, you can expect a third part, fourth part and maybe even a fifth part! i've already got a bunch of ideas :D
this story is a little shorter than usual, but i'm just tired but i still felt like uploading something, so here it is!
also, i really want my next fic to not be genshin, so if any of you have any suggestions please do comment! i've been in a demon slayer mood lately, especially...
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night22 - 3 years ago
the best part is that this is all canon, I remember the offical genshin twtitter posting about how paimon eats slimes
NotMax - 3 years ago
Honestly I'd be down with you writing whatever series as long as its something you like and enjoy, since that'd make for the best writing.
At least you're not cold anymore
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Belch Story Belching Unwilling Prey Betrayal Willing Pred Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred fatal digestion Human Pred Burping Cruel Pred cruel predator Best Friend Willing to unwilling prey burping up clothes Willing prey burping up items burping up bones Genshin Impact Amber (Genshin Impact) Eula Lawrence
woo!! i think i'm finally gonna start posting more often again, since i've had more motivation and the feed back on my last fic made me really happy, so thanks to anyone who commented, read, favorited it and stuff like that.. i appreciate it!
this time, we follow one of my favorite pairs, eula and amber! i wanted to do a yun jin fic, but i'm afraid i won't be able to write her well.. welp, expect a second part to my lumine fic coming in the near future! might have her eat another...
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Flame14 - 3 years ago
“Amber’s top and skull also landed on the floor with a loud thud, a shocked and painful expression still being left on Eula’s prey’s skull” Wait do you mean that Amber’s skull isn’t just bone here?
Also kind of a dick move on Eula’s part to digest her best friend like that. Poor Amber…
NotMax - 3 years ago
Excellent work! Love the dynamic of a tall pred effortlessly gulping down short prey.
Cle0 - 3 years ago
thank you for the comment! eula x amber are most definitely in my top 5 favorite genshin ships.. so i might make something more with them in the future
Quartersnake - 3 years ago
I was expecting accidental digestion, but this was a pleasant surprise! Love Eula pred.
BStone - 3 years ago
Oh, this is really good! I love Eula x Amber a lot... I always enjoy the way you describe skulls being burped out and cruel preds being so mean to their prey... Thank u so much!
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Human Digestion Burp Feral F/? Fatal Belch Story Belching Unwilling Prey Size difference Willing Pred Female Pred fatal digestion Human Pred Burping animal prey F/animal F/feral Cruel Pred feral prey Digestion Noises burping up items belching bones burping up bones Belching Up items Genshin Impact Paimon Lumine
welp! here's another fic after quite a long time.. i know i promised to pick up on my uploading, however, stuff's been rough and especially school has been rough, so there hasn't been a lot of time to do that
in this story, we follow lumine's first experience as a predator! this was also my first time writing feral prey or just feral characters in vore in general and i kind of enjoyed it, i can't say i'm gonna do it a lot in the future, but i might,, also definitely gonna make...
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RexLou - 3 years ago
Of course, I'm happy to give it! I love seeing other writers put so much work in finding unique characters and writing good belches!
Cle0 - 3 years ago
thank you! really happy to see that you enjoy my content..! :)
Cle0 - 3 years ago
mhm! might do it more in the future since it's quite easy to write compared to human prey
Cle0 - 3 years ago
thanks so much for the comment! i love your stories so i'm glad to see that you have commented.. thanks a lot for the feed back!
Cle0 - 3 years ago
thanks for the comment!! and yea, i was considering something like that.. i might do it in the near future :]
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Story mage Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred fatal digestion Burping smaller prey burping up items taller pred burping up shoes smaller prey/larger pred Genshin Impact Sucrose fatui Shorter prey fatui cicin mage
hello i am back from death again !! im not sure if i will start uploading more again or not buuut we will see,, for now here's a sucrose prey story !! might do a part 2 of this with albedo as the prey but i'm not a fan of f/m soo we will just have to see
if i dont end up being lazy and not doing it again, expect a fischl story soon ! :]
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Human Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Belch Unwilling Belching Unwilling Prey Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred Burping Onomatopoeia semi-cruel burping up clothes burping up items burping up objects Demon Slayer Kimetsu no Yaiba Mitsuri Kanroji Semi-Cruel Pred
hi! here's yet another post! i think u can say that i'm now gonna be active again! or i hope i can keep it up at least,, however, i hope you enjoy this story!
this is a rather short one, but i hope you still like it! i've been really getting more into the burping and stuff lately, so i hope you like this!
i know i haven't been doing a lot of my usual genshin stuff lately, so please comment if you would like me to go back to that
Schrodinger123 - 3 years ago
Hmm I see I suppose at some point if she does stay in mortal she would just rip her way clear out most likely best to die then. Hope you’re having a good day
Cle0 - 3 years ago
yeaa i planned on adding gyuutaro to the story as well but i just kind of went with only daki
Schrodinger123 - 3 years ago
That particular upper moon can only die if her brother dies alongside her so technically she would just endlessly regenerate which to be fair probably wouldn’t bother someone once they learned to walk around with that much extra weight because that means they never have to eat again although the screaming would probably get annoying eventually
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Belch Unwilling Belching Unwilling Prey F/FF Willing Pred Female Prey Male Prey Female Pred f/multiple F/FFM Cruel Burping Onomatopoeia cruelty Painful Digestion Cruel Pred Fast Digestion Digestion Noises Stomach Noises Tsuyu Asui Boku no Hero Academia Ochako Uraraka Multiple Preys My Hero Academia Himiko Toga female preys Katsuki Bakugo bnha Burping up skull burping up bones
yo! i'm not dead! and i finally posted something that isn't genshin! this is also my first time writing both multiple and male prey,, so this fic may not be the best. this was really only an experiment to see how i would do with multiple prey and male prey, and i might do both in the future, but they're definitely not a new favorite of mine,,
as i have said before, i have a few other stories prepared, i've just been busy with school and stuff so there hasn't been anytime to really...
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thathawnter29 - 3 years ago
nice story
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Human F/F Burp Unwilling Humanoid Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Female Prey human vore Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred Burping Uncaring Pred casual death Demon Slayer Shinobu Kochou Mitsuri Kanroji
and here's another story! this is quite an old one, so there may be some bad writing along with bad grammar, but i hope that you still enjoy it anyway!
i've finally changed stuff and posted a story that doesn't include genshin characters, but instead characters from another series which i enjoy just as much as i enjoy genshin!
i plan on making stories from all sorts of series, but that of course doesn't mean that i'll stop making genshin stories,, one of the series i...
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Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Fatal Story Bones Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred fatal digestion Human Pred Burping Onomatopoeia Cruel Pred cruel predator burping up clothes burping up items Burping up skull burping up bones Genshin Impact ningguang Beidou
soo, i've finally made another story! this time, it's a beidou one! i plan on making a fischl one next with her as the pred, so i'm really excited to do that one since she's one of my favorite characters,,, but i don't really know who the prey should be! so, if you have any female prey ideas, please do tell me in the comments!
i hope you enjoyed this story as much as i enjoyed writing it!
Cle0 - 3 years ago
oo yeah i love that idea! might actually do that,, thanks for the suggestion! <3
CheyCafe - 3 years ago
Another great story! As for the prey for Fischl, I think Noelle would make for a great one! Fischl is with the adventurer's guild, and they have been pining for Noelle to join their ranks for ages but Noelle always refuses because she wants to be a Knight of Favonius instead.
So perhaps Fischl would get angry at Noelle rejecting her offer to join the guild, so she decides to eat and digest her.
Just a suggestion!
Cle0 - 3 years ago
would love to but F/M isn't really my thing sadly,, i only do F/F, M/M and M/F
Bestab - 3 years ago
Can you try doing male prey with female pred
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Belly Digestion F/F Burp Same Size Unwilling Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Female Prey Female Pred Human Pred Burping Onomatopoeia burping up items Burping up skull burping up bones Genshin Impact Hu Tao yanfei
i'm not dead!! here's finally another story!! i'm gonna try to get even more stories out soon, since i'm finally off my "break" even though it wasn't really a break pff,, but i hope you're all doing well! stuff was kinda rough for me so i didn't get to do fics and stuff, but i hope that is gonna change soon!
i have many more fics planned soon as well! for an example, a few of the next fics coming are a kokomi fic, fischl fic, beidou fic and more! while it may take a while,...
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mgmga - 3 years ago
WAITING YOU
MagChan - 3 years ago
Good to see your writings again!
Quartersnake - 3 years ago
Great to see you back, Cleo! Veeery excited to see that fischl fic, and everything else you're preparing to write, too!
Revenge tastes like.. Peaches?
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Digestion F/F Burp Fatal Belch Story Belching Bones Female Prey Female Pred fatal digestion Burping torn clothing Cruel Pred burping up clothes burping up bones Belching up clothing Genshin Impact ayaka kamisato Kamisato Ayaka Yoimiya Naganohara Naganohara Yoimiya
Hello! I'm here with yet another story that is a sequel to my previous story which included Yoimiya and Ayaka Kamisoto from Genshin Impact, and here is a second part where Ayaka decides to take revenge in a more.. Cruel way.
I didn't really portray Ayaka's personality very well in this story, but I tried my best! This is a pretty short fic, but there will be longer stories in the future!
I am also opening requests, so if you want to see any genshin story, feel free to...
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JeebyHeebies - 3 years ago
Where was there rudeness? I wasn't hating on anything, nor did I "pick" the fight we're apparently in now.
Kurczak48 - 3 years ago
Why the rudeness? You have some sort of personal vendetta on her? They don't need a point, but just hating others leads us nowhere. If you want to pick fights then you're in the wrong place ^^;
JeebyHeebies - 3 years ago
And this is an extremely unnecessary reply to my unproductive comment. Not all comments need a point.
Kurczak48 - 3 years ago
Don't burn yourself out by biting off more than one can chew about the long stories! That's another good piece, just like Mona's!
Kurczak48 - 3 years ago
And this is extremely uneccesary and unproductive comment of yours.
She did try to cover the most of their characters. Not to mention there is a notice in the description about it...what's the point of your comment is unknown.
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore F/F Burp Same Size Belch Unwilling Story Non-fatal Belching Unwilling Prey Regurgitation Unwilling Pred Female Prey Female Pred Burping Accidental vore Genshin Impact ayaka kamisato Kamisato Ayaka Yoimiya Naganohara Naganohara Yoimiya
Hello again! I decided to make yet another story and while this one is pretty short, I hope you enjoy!
This is my first time writing both of these characters, so I'm afraid I didn't capture their personalities very well, but I tried my best to make it as accurate as possible!
Again, constructive criticism is always welcome.
Partiallygore - 3 years ago
I like the story, it's concise and easy to follow so great job! It's also always a nice surprise to see someone's take on an accidental vore incident especially with regurgitation! :D
kdzwitz - 3 years ago
its great to hear how ayaka decided to stay elegant and calm even after swallowed
FireRed2 - 3 years ago
Great story
As usual, the sun had been shining bright down on the surface of Earth, especially around Mondstadt. For some reason, it tends to get so hot there when the Summer hits. It wasn’t like anyone minded it though, the people of Mondstadt loved going to the beach and enjoying their free time by spending it in the water.
Nearby one of the many beaches sat quite a big mountain with a young lady sitting near the top. Her name
Uploaded: 3 years ago
Owner: Cle0
Tags: Oral Vore Belly Digestion F/F Burp Fatal Unwilling Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Female Prey Female Pred Burping Cruel Pred Digestion Noises Stomach Noises Genshin Impact Mona Megistus Sucrose
Hi! This is my very first vore fic on this account anddd.. Yeah, I decided to make it based on Mona and Sucrose since they're just my favorites and I think they're very underrated!
I hope you enjoy :]
I also love hearing criticism as it only helps me, so if you have any, please do write it down in the comments!
Anonymouslion - 3 years ago
I’ll have to at agree on the short swallowing part, another thing would be if they were at a beach, would sucrose have been wearing just a swimsuit or her normal clothes? Just little things like that for extra detail. And if she was wearing her normal clothes, removing them would’ve been a nice little touch too. But again that’s my two cents
Cle0 - 3 years ago
thank you!! i tried my best to make mona as cruel as i could!
BStone - 3 years ago
Love me some nice cruel Mona vore! I really enjoyed the details of Sucrose being broken into gut filling; it's simple yet effective.
It's really good, especially for a first work, thank you for sharing this!
Cle0 - 3 years ago
thank you for the comment! i'll definitely take that into consideration and make sure to have a longer swallowing process :]
Cle0 - 3 years ago
thank you for the comment! i'll definitely take that into consideration and make sure to have a longer swallowing process :]
vamobokita - 1 year ago
Hey nice work, i was wondering if you could do one story with Shenhe as a prey someday please?