Paid in Full
By
Insidher
Michael sat at his desk smiling to himself. He had been smiling to himself for a few weeks now, he couldn't help it. He couldn't believe his luck. Madeline, his tall, shapely secretary, some 20 years his junior, had finally become his official partner after a 5 year affair. He knew it was hard on Trudy. He didn't try and justify his actions, he knew that he was morally in the wrong, but that didn't change his feelings. She would just have to accept that
YuriFan - 15 years ago
Digestion is not hard vore.
Thesunrisemoose - 15 years ago
I enjoyed this story a lot, though next time you might want to put a hard vore tag on it. That way you won't catch people by surprise. Since it took a while for Trudy to start digesting maybe you could give another paragraph or two on what she felt the pred doing. Or more on what the pred did waddling around with a moving meal in her/his stomach. I feel you cut the ending a little short. You don't have to write about digestion in detail, that's optional. but there can be more describing going on about the post swallowing events. That's the best part of vore for some.
After the Club
By
Insidher
It was a cold, still evening as Tina locked her front door behind her and headed for the light rail. The rain of earlier that day had thankfully stopped a few hours ago. She walked quickly nonetheless, as she was anxious to be in the warmth. She could see her breath steaming in front of her, and she increased her pace as she approached the stop.
Tina had decided to go clubbing. As well as hoping to find a bite to eat, she was looking for something t
bela - 15 years ago
Nice to read a romantic story. Your descriptions are good - I'd like this sentence to be a whole paragraph: "He lay there in disbelief, helpless under Tina's body, as her mouth slowly engulfed his head."
Insidher - 15 years ago
Thanks for the comment and the favourite. I need to look at endings - someone raised that in connection with another story. I'll work on it in my next.
lonewolf90 - 15 years ago
Fantastic story. Very well written. It kept my interest throughout its entirety. The only problems I had with it were:
1. I didn't really like the ending. It was rather abrupt and seemed rushed.
2. I don't like digestion much but I guess that's more of a preference isn't it?
Other than those two gripes, I loved it.
Games with the Guard
By Insidher
Kathleen checked her BlackBerry with a sinking feeling on Sunday morning. When you were an ambitious young consultant, that's what you did. Well, you did if you were aiming to make partner before 30 anyway. The downside about doing so was that there would be occasions when you were required to work weekends, and despite home working facilities, even rarer ones when you would be expected to show up at the office. Kathleen didn't have to attend a meetin
Wierdost - 15 years ago
Really liked that, like your continuing characters and interesting scenarios, and your stories are getting better written. Good length too.
The Party
By Insidher
Tina stood in front of the mirror preparing for the party. She was a big woman, some 5 11 in her socks. She was also thick bodied and had broad shoulders, and had a stomach that was disproportionately, if not to say remarkably large. She was in her early 40's, and had long, thick brown hair.
Her breath fogged the glass as she stood there admiring her reflection. She could see the hungry look in her reflection's eyes, and she shot her tongue out and drew it acr
Liz - 15 years ago
It was good swallowing, even though they new something wasn't right with her action she still managed to score herself dinner :D
Nice work.
Insidher - 15 years ago
Glad you liked it, thanks for the forum comment on the other one btw. A few more ideas in the pipeline, I should have a couple more up in a week or so.
Wierdost - 15 years ago
Great story, well written and thought out, and great swallowing. Cannot wait to see more from you.
John and Tina
John had been looking forward to the flight ever since he got on board. Although he had been allocated a window seat that was most definitely coach, it looked a certainty that the seat next to him would be empty. A real bonus on a 10 hour flight. However, as his watch told him that they were passed departure time, he suspected that they were waiting for another passenger. He was right.
A woman came bustling down the gangway towards him. The angle of his seat and the li
thefatalenglishman - 12 years ago
I don't know why this story isn't more talked about. It's great. Love the dialogue. In fact, you do dialogue very well, and it's the best feature of your work. Thanks.
Insidher - 15 years ago
I think thesunrisemoose meant the bit where the ex wife partially chewed up the girlfriend, that probably does count as hard vore. I'll make some changes to this one and post up a revised version in the next two days.