Daniel did not want to wake up. He didn’t have work today, he didn’t have any plans today, he didn’t have anything to do today except sit around and waste time for twelve glorious hours. He didn’t want to wake up, he didn’t have to wake up, and so he wouldn’t wake up. He didn’t care about the ambient light of the sun that managed to reach him despite being in the shadows of the neighbouring buildings, he didn’t care about the constant echoing sound
Uploaded: 2 years ago
Owner: Mourtzouphlos
Tags: Furry Oral Vore Soft Vore Fox Human Anthro M/M Rabbit Bunny F/M Reformation pet enslavement Human Prey Slave Prey Male Prey Female Pred Male Pred tricked prey Bunny pred Furry Pred Anthro/Human Fox Pred Anthro Pred Human Slave Rabbit pred human pet fox/human Zootopia Nick Wilde Judy Hopps rabbit/human Rabbit Predator brainwashing blatant lies Bunny/human
A human wakes up and finds that he's been mysteriously transported to another world. Luckily, he quickly meets an inhabitant who seems helpful, so it'll probably turn out alright. And it will. For her, at least.
Mourtzouphlos - 2 years ago
I thought so, but I wasn't quite sure how to balance 'I already know what it's supposed to be' vs. 'you focus on the flaws in your own work'. You can't really know until you show it to other people.
alockwood1 - 2 years ago
Seemed more or less okay.
Mourtzouphlos - 2 years ago
Trying to establish a distinctive character voice is one of my weaker spots, I admit. I tried to keep them in-character when they were interacting with each other, but I'm not sure how well that turned out.
alockwood1 - 2 years ago
Yeah - I was adding to a fanfic interactive where Judy was dealing with a shrunken human that was the size of a mouse, and another one where vore occurs.
Big thing in any fan-fic in my opinion, is to keep the characters in-character, more or less.
alockwood1 - 2 years ago
Helps if you re-watch the source material, as it were, note the little phrases used in certain situations and so on.