I don't know why I did what I did. I knew it was crazy, given how poison joke made me fly weird. So it was no surprise
that I asked Zecora for the antidote as a just in case. So, with a plan to treat my marefriend, Applejack, I fly uncontrollably to her home, and crash right into her as she was bucking apples.
I was minding my own business, when all of a sudden Rainbow Dash came crashing out of the sky! The buck
Uploaded: 6 years ago
Owner: MystiLake
Tags: Unbirth F/F Sex Anal Vore My Little Pony Applejack Rainbow Dash Accidental vore
Rainbow Dash and Applejack have been dating for a while. So explicit activities are not unusual between them. So when Rainbow Dash crashes into Applejack after "flying through Poison Joke", some more intimate activities take place.
A roleplay done between myself and Shyny, which went so well we continued it right after. Hope you guys enjoy!
Base54 - 6 years ago
One thing that I noticed is that each new paragraph starts with Rainbow Dash and Applejack's perspectives. I have a hunch that this wasn't done unintentionally since it happens so frequently. It's not a bad fic, it's well written. And I won't tell you how to write 1st person view. Just remember that it could become confusing to a reader, constantly having to remember that each new paragraph, a new perspective is given. To fix this problem, I would suggest having one fic express Rainbow's point of view and then release another one where it expresses Applejack's point of view.
An Alien Experience
A
Minako
Tomoka
and
Mysti
Lake
Roleplay
Uploaded: 6 years ago
Owner: MystiLake
Tags: Unbirth F/M Hypnosis Swallowing Non-fatal Tentacle Human Prey Original Character kidnapped alien pred
Unknown to Mysti, there's an alien race in need of a mate. All the other human mates have died when the alien called Melody has tried to use them, and Mysti is next. Will he be able to get out alive, or will he be trapped as Melody's wife forever?
This was a fun roleplay I did with Minako Tomoka again, and this was her idea. It was our first time trying unbirth and tentacles together, and was fun to do.
Usual links, as per usual:
Minako Tomoka's Portal, so...
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MystiLake - 6 years ago
Same! I look forward to the next one!
minakotomoka14 - 6 years ago
I had a lot of fun writing this with you, and reading it after the fact was just as good! I always enjoy roleplaying with you!
MystiLake - 6 years ago
I understand. Unfortunately, this was written as a RP with Shyny, so for that reason it can be jumpy.
Thanks for the feedback though! We're actually doing more 3rd person RPs if we know they're going to be shared to compensate for this (because rules on FimFiction dictate it)