triviumchimaira - 5 months ago

Always fun to get a comment from someone I also watch~
Glad you like it!

RedNastyFox - 5 months ago

Such a lovely predatory kitty! ^__^

juicefox - 3 years ago

Thanks. And, yeah, stories are a lot of work, and motivation is hard to find. Hope to see more if you can find the time and energy.

triviumchimaira - 3 years ago

Glad you like it :3 your game was pretty fun too! And yeah :3 tryin to do more with it! I have way more ideas then I have time XD

juicefox - 3 years ago

Oh hey, can't believe I missed this. It's good to see you continue this series. Love betrayal in vore. That sudden flip from close friends to disposable gratification is always hot.

triviumchimaira - 8 years ago

Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it. :D

triviumchimaira - 8 years ago

I have worked out how I want to work that story, and I think it will turn out pretty good, I don't want to get into any details that may spoil it however, but I hope to make it the next story I put out.

triviumchimaira - 8 years ago

I have worked out how I want to work that story, and I think it will turn out pretty good, I don't want to get into any details that may spoil it however, but I hope to make it the next story I put out.

Qaz81 - 8 years ago

I have in fact played it, and I enjoyed it quite a lot!

juicefox - 8 years ago

Dude, you should play my text adventure game (link: [url]https://aryion.com/g4/view/389126[/url]). It features a very similar scenario. You might like it.

triviumchimaira - 5 years ago

God have I really had writers block for 2 years X.X

To answer your questions.
I know $50 is easy to earn when you have a job, that is the point. People who have jobs get the chance to live, the vast majority of prey who are unable to get jobs however have to choose if they want to spend what may be a week of food for the chance to have one more pill to not die, but risk staving to death, or do they want to get food and risk ending up as food with no pill to save them.

And I do not recall saying who can or can not but the pills, I looked back over the story and didn't see what you were talking about. The pills are kinda like a condom, the pred can buy them if they want, but it's a better idea for the prey to have one in case they end up inside someone who doesn't have one, or doesn't want to use them to start with.

Mechdragon1k - 5 years ago

50 dollers can be earned in a day work, maybe one can have 50 or 500 dollers pils that must be taken one week before for preplanned stuff and panic pills cost at least 50 k. Something like that as fifty dollers for a extra life is way to cheap.

Why cannot prep buy the pills? They could hand money to the prey for pill buying.

juicefox - 8 years ago

Thanks! And I'm sorry if all my comments are getting to be a bit too much. I'm just super hyped about this story.

triviumchimaira - 8 years ago

Thanks, that was the goal :D Im glad that people (at least one X3) like it. Also, I played your game, its pretty good too <3 casual vore FTW :3

juicefox - 8 years ago

That's good to hear. Although I don't like reformation, I will admit that giving prey folk an extra means of escape does spice things up, and the cost of these pills does create some interesting dilemmas (eg, do I buy pills now or save money for college, which will help me get a white collar). So, although I don't generally like reformation, your use of it does gives the setting a lot of depth, and I appreciate that.

Luffredd - 2 years ago

Wouldn't be a bad way to go :)

triviumchimaira - 2 years ago

Glad it stuck with you~ Knowing George, if it looked like he was gonna lose he most likely would find a reason to 'accidentally' sit on Ruvaak XD

Luffredd - 2 years ago

I drafted unfinity yesterday and remembered this story. I wonder how thier match ended :)

leonthegreat - 1 year ago

What a horrible ending. Stories about souls always bother me. To think his soul was stolen and destroyed without his consent is pretty awful. Good story though.

Arokh - 8 years ago

Followup! Yus!

maraudingmarauder - 8 years ago

Hehehe, sounds fun. Well, one way or another they've got to come to terms with their souls being stuck in their friend and what that means for them, so that's always a fun thing to play with!

triviumchimaira - 8 years ago

A lot of my vore is going to be fatal, the first ones were not due to request from the people in it. This one was a fun idea I had of: what would happen if two people find out souls are real just as theirs are getting eaten. I may or may not write a follow up if people are interested. Otherwise its up to the reader what happens to the two confused victims. :P

maraudingmarauder - 8 years ago

Oooh, nonlethal soulnoms? That's gonna be a fun one for them to try and figure out later!