Three hours before sitting across
from the young man she knew just as Charlie, Lauren Augustin had
found herself quite hungry, so she started flipping through her
Tinder. She hadn’t needed to worry about finding guys since getting
the app: her main picture was the favorite she had of herself, the
angle of her straight jawbone and neck accentuated as she looked
slightly to the sky, framing her red upper lip over which curled a
long, pointed tongue, her brown hair swept by the wind to border the
Uploaded: 9 years ago
Owner: vored123
Tags: Mouth Belly Digestion F/M Same Size Fatal Unwilling writing Masturbation Implied Digestion belly play
This story was meant to locate my understanding of vore: why it's a turn on, sexual symbolism, and how mouth-stomach-digestion viscera are sexualized.
To me, vore fantasy is representative of the desire to be desired so ultimately and completely that the pred would literally wish to devour you, a state which can be achieved in the stasis of being inside of and possessed by someone.
I think predators are motivated similarly, but that's clearly me projecting my turn-ons onto them....
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FrozenTear89 - 9 years ago
This pharse, "he just wouldn’t realize until his hair was soaked through with her stomach acid", almost made me pass out, very hot story! Your style is absolutely amazing! Waiting for new stories!
vored123 - 9 years ago
Not sure who flagged you or why; that's a constructive criticism.
You're right - the question there only really applies for my particular iteration of the fetish, which clearly involves digestion.
I get what you're saying about the language, but I figured that the plot was rightly subordinated to the style in this case - the flashback, for example, is blurry, hard to understand and abstract, because Lauren herself had no idea what was going on at the time. I also wanted to show Lauren's estrangement between that memory and her present, being that a large part of this project is to discuss the idea of death, ignorance, and the stasis of pleasure. I don't think you're wrong, though, that more clarity is possible. I'll definitely consider that.
ryanshowseason3 - 9 years ago
"would you take this satisfaction at the price of sure death? It's a question buried somewhere in this vore fetish of ours."
Eh, not for everyone I imagine. Those into endo and extremely unwilling scenarios I doubt. But I get the idea.
Lots of waxing detail. It's beautiful prose to be sure but feels like it gets in the way sometimes of telling the story. Perhaps it was because I hadn't fully woken up yet but the flashback was slightly confusing.
AlekSavarov - 9 years ago
I enjoyed this a great deal. Your descriptions are fascinating.
night22 - 9 years ago
I was waiting to favorite this! Grats ln the gallery!
FrozenTear89 - 9 years ago
Dont know what are you talking about "failing", but it's one of the hottest vore stories I've ever read! Will be nice to see more detailed digestion process in your next stories (yeah I'm so cruel girl :D ). Waiting for your new stories!!