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Tags: androcide bulging stomach Burp Burping Cruel Pred Digestion Disposal extinction F/M f/multiple Fart fart disposal Farting Fatal Female Pred Gas Disposal genocide Human male extinction Male Prey Mass Vore Misandry Multiple Preys Onomatopoeia Same Size Scientist scientist pred Teleportation teleportation vore Unwilling Prey
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This story was originally a lot longer (Like 5 pages longer) as I had written a much bigger conclusion, but I felt like that was all stuff people wouldn't care about so I made the ending a lot shorter.
To summarize my initial plan a bit:
1. wrote about Veronica talking to her co-conspirator, a character that I also had to introduce (I might make an own story for her some other day though)
2. wrote a small backstory for Veronica
3. wrote about what had happened to humanity following the extinction of men
4. Got into detail about the disappearance of orange juice
5. And I made a scat scene
I wasn't able to write all of this in a satisfying way so I took the easy way out and scrapped it all.
edit: I uploaded the follow up, it's a little incomplete though https://aryion.com/g4/view/1005503
Anyway, I was unsure about a lot of things writing this so if you read through the whole thing I would love to hear what you think! Whether you liked or disliked what you read I would welcome the criticism so that I can hope to do better next time.
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Posted by Emeryx117 1 year ago Report
hajdhg, god, male extinction gets me so hard for some reason
Posted by WNEC 1 year ago Report
I know, it's the best thing since sliced bread!
Thank you for feedback!
Posted by Cynder13 11 months ago Report
Amazing story can we see the extended ending sounds good as well?
Posted by WNEC 11 months ago Report
Sure. I can upload it on my profile, I was going to be rewriting that thing and uploading it as a follow up to this story at one point anyway. However I can upload it as incomplete, I will need some time to proofread and perhaps edit it a bit though so maybe I'll upload it tomorrow.
Posted by Cynder13 11 months ago Report
So how would it be a follow up since the story ended with extinction?
Posted by WNEC 11 months ago Report
The bullet points I mentioned in the description describe that. There wouldn't be any people getting eaten in the follow up.
Posted by WNEC 11 months ago Report
I have uploaded the follow up now. Here it is:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/1005503