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Bryce's shift at Target ended 15 minutes ago, and his mother Phoebe is starting to get worried... I wonder what will happen next!
Here's a link to Charity's official reference pic: https://aryion.com/g4/view/994107
Sorry for being much less active on here recently! I got kinda busy with IRL stuff, plus I'm trying to find a better balance of writing vs my other hobbies; cause as much as I enjoy writing these stories it was eating up ALL of my free time. I'm not going anywhere, though!
As always, I love to hear your thoughts and comments! I hope yall enjoy Charity's return!
Posted by GuttsButtsNCoconutts 11 months ago Report
Hmm… on the one hand: Hot, love to see more of your work and more of Charity (she’s always such a gross delight). On the other… actually kinda sad. Like, I felt bad for both this kid and his mom.
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Posted by boyfrog 11 months ago Report
Glad that Charity was still delightful! But im curious, what do you think makes this one sadder than say, Doctor's Orders?
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Posted by doomed 11 months ago Report
Jeez this one just felt so depressing , I hope pheobe suffers the same fate and is reunited lol
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Posted by boyfrog 11 months ago Report
I don't feel like writing a full sequel, but I'm gonna say that Phoebe ends up getting Charity's number from Bryce's manager and asks her where she pooped Bryce.
She visits the gas station frequently, and on the one year anniversary she impulsively decides to let the scrawny cashier girl eat her, on the condition that she gets shit into that same toilet. When she wakes up as the skinny girl's new badonkadonk, she realizes her son's ACTUAL resting place is Charity's big fat fart machine.
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Posted by doomed 11 months ago Report
Oof an even worse date for that mom
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Posted by boyfrog 11 months ago Report
There's always the small chance that Charity and the cashier might sit next to each other on the bus or at the BMV or something. That'd put their butts close enough together that Phoebe and Bryce could have a brief reunion.
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Posted by Luckless 11 months ago Report
Fantastic story! This sentiment right here, " All she could hear was the laughter. Her last chance to be someone had been reduced to lunch for a random redneck lady with a fat ass, and everyone knew. They knew, and they found it hilarious." Compounded the feeling of despair and loss that I think all vore fiends long for. Well done.
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Posted by Rambodash 11 months ago Report
Amen brother.
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Posted by boyfrog 11 months ago Report
Thank you so much! I appreciate the specific quote of what you liked! That blend of humilation and despair is something I very much try and tap into, so it's always great to hear that I've succeeded (and that other people like it, lmao)
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Posted by Snuffmeitshot 11 months ago Report
I wonder are there ever circumstances where a person who has shrunk/been stickered can’t be claimed as food? I understand if it’s the permanent shrinking making them permanently considered food or not a person, but let’s say your a doctor on the way to surgery or a firefighter/officer on your way to an emergency and you come down with temporary shrinking or some hungry brat stickers you. Wouldn’t it be considered invalid due to being essential personnel? Or are they still free game?
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Posted by boyfrog 11 months ago Report
Well, with shrinking, chances are they'll be too small for whatever it is they were gonna do. If a person is important or weakthy enough, they might have bodyguards/assistants that would protect them in the case of an acute shrinking. I think there would be laws against stickering emergency personel during an active emergency, especially against things like a person pretending to drown so they can sticker the lifeguard. But for the doctor in your example, sucks to be them. The hospital can have a different surgeon take over, or just reschedule the surgery.
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Posted by Rambodash 11 months ago Report
Charity is such a gem. You've got a great eye for finding scenarios where Charity's particular brand of innocent cruelty is just what's needed to expose the inner lives of the characters around her. Plus, you know, fart on them. I love how Jordan is just so sick of her shit after having to put up with it (literally) her whole life.
Also keep it up with the playful & sad tone! Emotional ambition is are a really undersold part of kink writing and strong kinks deserve strong emotions
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Posted by boyfrog 11 months ago Report
Thank you!!! "Innocent cruelty" is such a good phrase to describe Charity. She teases her food, and thinks its hilarious when the person in her belly starts kicking harder after she farts; but there's no malice in it. To her, it's no different to watching the three stooges and laughing when Moe twists Curley's nose. Her simplicity definitely has an effect on the people around her! (As do her farts)
Jordan always has to be the responsible one in the family, so she has an understandably thin patience for her mother's antics.
I really appreciate you saying that about the tone! I very much agree that kink/fantasy is a way to explore and vent strong feelings and emotions. Writing these stories has definitely been very helpful and freeing in that regard. I also just really enjoy the contrast of silly farts + horrible death, lol.
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Posted by Tricky567 11 months ago Report
Babe wake up new charity story just dropped….lol glad to see you back in the saddle buddy!
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Posted by boyfrog 11 months ago Report
New Charity story just dropped like the fat turds that used to be Bryce dropped into that gas station toilet...
Thank you, glad to be back! I probably won't be writing as frequently as before, but I'm gonna try and not take such a long break this time!
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Posted by Kelly 10 months ago Report
The story was awesome !
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Posted by boyfrog 10 months ago Report
Thank you so much!! ^^
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Posted by Lipodem 10 months ago Report
A boyfrog story? In this economy? We're thriving! Honestly though, being less active is totally valid - you were really pumping those stories out! Honestly I struggled with that to the point where I just got burnt out in the vore scene and had to take a step back until I balanced out my free time better (Hence why I'm a month late... NotLikeThis). Suppose it's better to be burnt out than churned up though!
Much like Charity and Burritos, I loved this story to bits! You've got a talent for making me get invested/interested in every character involved! Well Charity herself put on the show, it was a blast (A rather gaseous one at that!) watching unremarkable Phoebe poorly navigate the roller coaster that was her son's impending doom. I LOVE that she had not one, but TWO chances to save poor Bryce... and screwed it up so colossally that it'd even put Charity's ass to shame! I was hooked on Phoebe when she left poor Bryce to fend for himself in Charity's ass (And soon to be gut!) AGAIN. I mean, poor Bryce was doomed to his fate because his mom was embarrassed? You'd think your son's life would be your priority as a mother, not saving face or worrying about what Carol might think of her! Mother of the Year award goes to... But hey, maybe I'm being too mean. She did resolve herself to go back for her son after all! Even if a 'little toot' was all it took to foil opportunity #2.
It was nice to see Jordan rear her head too! Loved the brief little interaction she had with her mum here, and that Charity was more concerned with WHY her vehicle was transitioning into the world's worst-smelling sauna - and not the fact that it was. Poor girl...
I did want to quickly ask though as I can't remember for the life of me - was there a reason Charity waited 30 minutes to enjoy her little Bryce burrito?
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Posted by boyfrog 10 months ago Report
Yeahhhh, I had a lot of fun pumping those stories out, but it was eating up all my free time. It started to get awkward when family/friends asked what ive been up to lately... but now I'm trying to figure out a good balance of when to write; i still have tons of ideas i want to get out!
Thank you for the thoughtful and thorough feedback as always! Phoebe is certainly not winning any parenting awards. Neither is Charity for that matter, poor Jordan...
Charity waited to eat Bryce until after her shift was done because she's gotten in trouble for gassing up the store before!
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Posted by Tummylock 10 months ago Report
I can't believe that I just miss that story! Okay, that was truly awesome! It may be just my impression, but it seems you are going to a more "tragic" kinds of scenarios lately. And I must say, it is absolutely hot. I hope that you keep that line, going even further of how tragic and cruel you can be, because it is really something unique and makes your universe so special
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Posted by boyfrog 10 months ago Report
Thank you!! I cant say I've been intentionally going for tragedy, but i can see the pattern! I just think that getting eaten for real would probably involve a lot of intense emotions, lol
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Posted by Tummylock 10 months ago Report
I agree, and I love this aspect of your stories!
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