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Happy Vore day!!!
Dina runs into her friend Blair, who's been watching some interesting TikToks lately...
Featuring Dina and Diego, previously seen here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/978836
Been dealing with some writer's block lately, but I had to get something out for 8/8, so I pushed though and got this one done! I hope you enjoy it!
As always, I love to read your comments and feedback!
Posted by doomed 8 months ago Report
Poor Diego and Caleb. These moms are hilariously psychotic as they clearly don’t love their sons . Or rather love themselves significantly more to the point of deluding themselves into thinking they want to die a horrid death just for their mom.
Also seems like that tea guarantees the victim is trapped as sentient fat . Based on the implications of that doctors sons death anyway .
Hopefully this story kills your writers block lol
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
The tea is basically just a natural digestive aid, all the other stuff is just BS. All these moms are eating their kids for no reason!
That said, Caleb IS sentient fat on his mom's butt now, so she's accidentally correct about them being together forever! Diego might suffer the same fate, or he might get flushed away like the rest of Dina's meals... but that's for another story
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Posted by doomed 8 months ago Report
Oof poor Diego , hopefully he doesn’t get shit out by his mom lol
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Posted by Tanookicatoon 8 months ago Report
Goodness, these moms are just the woooorst! =w=❤
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
They're AWFUL. But bad moms are the best moms!
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Posted by Tricky567 8 months ago Report
Holy crap boy frog just posted
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
Holy crap indeed!
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Posted by GuttsButtsNCoconutts 7 months ago Report
I’m pretty sure holy crap is what they call it when a nun goes to the bathroom. I guess that’s one way to “save their souls”? Eat as many folks as you can, and when you go to heaven you can take all of them with you!
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Posted by boyfrog 6 months ago Report
There are churches who believe and teach that souls can be purified and carried to heaven this way; however they're wrong on two major points;
One, if the pred uses digestive aids to avoid gainibg weight, the prey's soul is simply pooped out, and will go to whatever afterlife they were going to anyway.
Two, while sentient fat DOES go with the pred to their afterlife, they will remain as sentient fat for eternity; the souls do not seperate upon reaching heaven/hell
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Posted by FarBeyondStrange 8 months ago Report
Here I was down on myself, then I get treated to a story of a wonderfully depraved mother and her poor, unfortunate son.
I'll admit that this does get me going; firing up my writer's side.
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
Im glad my horrible, depraved story helped you feel better! That's what art is all about, right? XD
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Posted by FarBeyondStrange 8 months ago Report
I do hope this new trend carries over into future works. Love the idea of a couple of old friends catching up over some tea with full bellies stuffed with their sons turned future bowel-movements.
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Posted by Tummylock 8 months ago Report
Oh my god! I was so excited to see Diego being eaten! Latinas need more love, specially the milfs!
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Posted by DoctorHver 8 months ago Report
Agreed this needs another sequel :)
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
I've got more planned for Dina and Diego, don't worry!
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
Diego might not have gotten eaten this time, but he's 100% mom food eventually!
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Posted by Tummylock 8 months ago Report
Please make it specially cruel! I know you can do it!
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Posted by HMDVore 8 months ago Report
This was fantastic! Short and sweet, hot and sexy. Would love to see more like this from you.
RIPBOZO
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
Short and sweet is what i was going for! Longer stories are great too, but i love a short, snappy vore story
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Posted by HMDVore 8 months ago Report
I really enjoyed the dark dystopian realism of the terminally online social media aspects from Caleb's mother. As others have said, the detail about her using an AI text to speech vore on the video of her digesting her son is perfect. Doesn't even dignify her son's death with her own voice. She melted him all away just to make a single short form Instagram post!
Another detail I really enjoyed was how Diego saw Caleb's mom for what she was. She didn't look old to him. She didn't even some special tea to make her look younger. She had been brainrotted by social media like many people are in reality, developing these insane body expectations. All Diego did was make her ass fatter. And that must really tear Diego up inside that his friend's mom churned him up for nothing, basically.
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Posted by Kroton68 8 months ago Report
You really captured the way people on Instagram use those sanitised AI voices. Cracking stuff as always!
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
TYSM!! I was really trying to nail that part, glad to hear I succeeded!
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Posted by Lipodem 8 months ago Report
I always forget vore day is a thing! But it was really nice to see Dina return. It gives me hope for another character >:D All that said - I'm so fucking sorry for this essay of a comment. It uh... got away from me...
Blair was certainly attractive, as I couldn't help but love the contradictions of her character. She loves Caleb... but she'd casually decide her own appearance trumped her son (And the rest of her kids, for that matter), and what's more, she had no issue parading the poor boy around in nothing but a pair of edible undies. And of course, I couldn't help but enjoy knowing all the facts, but then seeing her tell her audience about how Caleb 'offered' to help. That kind of unintentional cruelty makes my brain melt faster than Caleb did in her gut...
I never knew what to expect once she started speaking to Dina about doing the same with poor Diego! Of course, I knew at least one boy was getting digested tonight, but I didn't know if Diego was safe until you wanted me to know. That's always one thing I love about your stories - if you're great at writing them, we only know if a character will make it out of a situation if you want us to know. Likewise, loved that we got Diego's POV not as prey but as an observer to something so close to his own circumstances.
I do feel for poor Diego, though! Well, I might love that any character could potentially be eaten for even the most silly or minor of reasons—I can't imagine he does! Part of me can't help but picture the idea that a big part of why he's being kept around is how helpful he is rather than any familial bond. Better keep unclogging Mum's toilets!
I did love some of the more minor aspects of the story, too, of course! Dina being a landlord(?) was a fun detail to add since it gave her a reason to be in the store and told us more about her. Been really into the idea of a landlord pred for a while now, even if that aspect has yet to be as explored. Reading through the comments is always a blast whenever social media and vore are paired! That comment @'ing daisychain7788 ,and of course, Dina's being amusing additions!
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Posted by boyfrog 8 months ago Report
I'm curious, who are you hoping to see return?
But thank you thank you! Always happy to make folk's brains melt, lol. And yeah, i love stories from an observer's POV almost as much as ones from the prey's POV. Especially when that observer knows how likely they are to end up on the memu one day! A little preview of what's in store for them, whenever the day comes...
And yes, Dina's a landlord! That will likely be the focus of the next story she stars in.
Social media and vore is such a great paring, and the comments are a big reason why! Poor daisychain has it rough. Moms can eat their kids whenever they want, but only until they become adults. Daisychain's already in college, so she's safe; but her little sister isn't. So now she has to decide; let her sister get digested, or willingly feed herself to her terrible mother.
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Posted by HMDVore 8 months ago Report
I think the one thing that this story missed was more detailed digestion and disposal, so I'm hoping Caleb makes a return in a sequel so we can get it from his perspective!
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Posted by boyfrog 6 months ago Report
I won't do a whole sequel, but I can say that Caleb's digestion wss initially slow and painful, due to Blair doing a whole photoshoot with her son-filled belly. He got to hear her being far more concerned with finding the right filters than with his suffering. Lots of teasing from his little sister, too. Once she was satisfied with the pictures she took, she drank the tea and he was churned up in about an hour. So, about 3 hours total.
Since he died relatively quickly after the tea, he was already concious as sentient fat when it was time to shit his remains. So he got a front row seat to his mom taking the fattest, most satisfying dump of her life. Huge logs that had her toes curling.
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Posted by boyfrog 6 months ago Report
Oh, to clarify, I don't plan to do a sequel that's Caleb's PoV here; but I do have sequels planned for Dina and Blair
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Posted by Lipodem 8 months ago Report
Believe it or not, Mandy! She was only around for a short while, but she certainly managed to leave a lasting impression, haha.
Shit, makes sneaking in that she's a landlord here even better!
Damn, I thought the Daisy bit was a one-off comment, but it's clear you've put a lot of thought into it. Poor girl... You're too twisted for your own good! I don't know if I could let myself get digested just to save a sibling. However, I'd be lying if I said the idea of Daisy willingly feeding herself to her mother only to find out her little sister is still on the menu after the fact wasn't appealing!
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Posted by boyfrog 6 months ago Report
I do have some ideas for Mandy that I might get to eventually!
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Posted by EmmaTummy 4 months ago Report
Making it so the trend didn't actually do anything was masterful. Incredible story. Really hoping for a follow-up!
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