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Three Anuses, Shitting off a Bridge By Vesari -- Report

Three women have a chance meeting one night, when they're in dire need of relief...

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Had this idea one night, and ended up writing it in a single sitting. Took me like 3 hours, but I think it came out pretty well!

This week on Patreon/Subscribestar, my patrons selected "Moving in with a Predator (Chapter 3)" for an alternate ending. This time around, Chris picks a fight with Becky that she doesn't win...
https://www.patreon.com/posts/moving-in-with-3-105823021
https://subscribestar.adult/posts/1324021

Also, my new vore audio "Accidental Pred" is available too. "When you have an unlucky fall, a woman breaks your fall. Unfortunately for you, you fall straight into her belly. And she has no idea how to let you out! Or if she even will..." You can listen to it here:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/accidental-pred-105083340

Thumbnail art (and inspired) by "hirorinwelcome", https://img3.gelbooru.com/images/72/1a/721aaa56ddadf12179f8e7bc5980f9ec.jpg

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purmin

Posted by purmin 10 months ago Report

They are all korean?

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ElysiaBale

Posted by ElysiaBale 10 months ago Report

What do you figure, chief?

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Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 10 months ago Report

Nice story

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Dooot

Posted by Dooot 10 months ago Report

Good shit(get it?)!

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ElysiaBale

Posted by ElysiaBale 10 months ago Report

This is brilliant work. High quality and soul-suckingly sexy. I liked how the girls were nameless; it really enhances the feeling of them being pretty much anyone. A night like this could be—and is—happening to thousands of women all over the country even at this moment. Nothing out of the ordinary. Personally would have loved a few bones being pushed out too, but that's just my taste. Lovely!

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Trinnean

Posted by Trinnean 10 months ago Report

Aww, that was sweet. ????

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Raesetsu

Posted by Raesetsu 10 months ago Report

This is such a banger. I love your disposal details and digestion details, so on point.

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hax

Posted by hax 10 months ago Report

The themes and structure on this one feel really ambitious, I'm kinda blown back by everything that's here in under 3500 words! I'm not crazy about the setting and some mechanical aspects of the writing, but also I read and write really weirdly when it comes to ero so I might just not be the target audience over the stuff I mean by "mechanical".

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Sira

Posted by Sira 10 months ago Report

Awwww I loved this <3

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Observer702

Posted by Observer702 9 months ago Report

Doesn't matter much, but it seems you aciddenrly posted the description of your last story for this one?

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