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(Poll Story) Heartbreak - Prey Ending By PaperWriter -- Report

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Hello! For those that don't follow me or just missed the poll, this is a story that I had too many ideas for how it might end, so I had to do a poll for people to help me pick an ending from the list of ten I'd come up with. (though I was up to twelve ideas by the time the poll ended)

A story about Mary, an ordinary young woman in a world where prey confess to predators; with her heart set on a friend that is... unavailable to confess to, by the time Mary gets to her... leaving the heartbroken girl unsure what to do with her life now.

This is one of the two endings that won, option 4, one of the ones where Mary ends up in a belly anyways~

For those that voted for it, let me know what you think of the result! For those that didn't, let me know anyways! All of you have a great and horny day now! ^^

PS: Didn't originally intend for there to be flowers in the thumbnail, but I figured I might as well keep them given this is one of the more romantic settings I've written.

PPS: Silly note I realized while writing, but I really can't remember the last time I read a character described with average, C-cup breasts. They're always either small A or B-cups, or big Ds or DDs or whatever... I can't remember the last time I read someone with specifically regular C-cups...

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IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 10 months ago Report

Eva had quite the charms. And the way she spotted an opportunity and best made of it meant she got to walk home with a full belly.

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 10 months ago Report

Glad you liked her! She was fun to write... sometimes all you need to snag a cute and delicious dinner is to recognize that she's up for grabs~

DK2207

Posted by DK2207 10 months ago Report

Got a link to part one?

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 10 months ago Report

Part one?

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 10 months ago Report

Ohhhhhh
Took me way too long for that to click

This is a standalone story, I'd figured out the first part, of Mary wanting to confess and finding Danny in the midst of getting eaten; but I was really fuzzy on what happened after that, so I made the poll to narrow it down to a few endings and save myself the massive headache trying to decide was giving me. Sorry for the confusion there.

voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 10 months ago Report

That was a really good story! You could totally do like a alt ending on Mary getting her dream of Danny's belly or Danny's perspective of her belly experience:)

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 10 months ago Report

Thank you! ^^

One on hand, I admit, more endings are tempting. On the other hand... the whole reason I turned it into a poll was because there were far too many tempting endings, and I got headaches trying to decide and was afraid of burning out if I did too many so... probably just gonna be doing the two that won :/

voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 10 months ago Report

Ah right yeah do what you gotta do bro and get that rest. Goof stuff ;)