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Hey y'all! This ending took me a little longer than the first one, on account of it being about uh, four thousand words and ~eleven pages longer than the last. What can I say? First time pred, pred perspective... the POV character actually living through the story... lots of things that stretched it out. Probably didn't help that I kept having ideas for characters and scenes and probably some world-building along the way... (as if I ever get around to sequels)
Anyways, for those that didn't see the first story; this is the story of Mary, a young woman that lives in a world where prey confess to preds and end up in their bellies. A young woman that goes to confess to her crush of the last four years, only to have her day end... differently than expected. "Spoiler~" this is the ending that she survives.
I had the first part of this story done, but couldn't decide on an ending, so I put it up for a poll and ended up writing two separate endings! (way less than the like, ten I was debating between) Funny enough though, I got to the end of this one and had the thought that I could imply two separate futures for Mary, one where she embraces her new desires and one where she returns to her old ones... I liked the ending I chose better of the two.
Oh! I hope you all have/had a happy 4th of July, by the way! It's pouring rain here but I'm sure someone's having a good time ^^
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Posted by Turnish3 9 months ago Report
I adore PredPOV! (You should add the tag)
I'm going to love reading this.
Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report
It amuses me that the first time I debated putting a "feel free to add any tags I missed" note but didn't... the first comment I get is a tag I missed...
More seriously, I hope you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing it ^^
Posted by voredrawing 9 months ago Report
Wow! Just wow! Both these versions of the story were great. I'd say this one was my favourite out of the two. I just wanted it to keep going and going and going hahah. Suuuurely they'll be a Danny Pred ending after reading these two great vore story creations xD
Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report
Glad to hear you enjoyed it, I know I enjoyed writing it! I could see myself revisiting this setting -maybe even using Mary as a pred again- if I wanted to do a simpler, shorter story... but I don't think Danny's gonna be a part of it. Her role in the story is and was always meant to be to churn away in Ms. Mai's belly... honestly, I don't think I really even thought of any more details on her than what the story mentions... I never even gave her a hair color or a skin color, or... anything, really.
There was originally some endings that reunited the pair in Ms. Mai's belly in the poll, one where Mary ended up in Danny's belly and one where they digested alongside each other, buuuut they didn't win, and prey POV isn't really my favorite thing to write. I mean, it's sexy, but pred POV is more enjoyable for me... probably another contributor to this story being so much longer than the first ^^'
Posted by voredrawing 9 months ago Report
Yeah bro do what you gotta do! Been a fan of everthing thats come out so far! Whatever feels right and natural to you is the way to go as you are the author afterall :)
Posted by kkll1424 9 months ago Report
Who’s the owner of the thumbnail?
Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report
Me. It's AI generated but fine print says I own it
Posted by theonlymatt 9 months ago Report
That's... god damn. I love both of these, but this one was the best of them I think.
Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it, this one's definitely my favorite of the two as well ^^