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I needed a bit of a break from the island story, and D20 rules, so here's something completely different. My first attempt at a giantess scenario.

"Then why is it tagged-" Because that's the scenario I thought of.

This has minor links at most to anything I've posted in my gallery, but it's a return to a character archetype I've been thinking over for a decade. Although, it is a shame that this practice writing was the best way I could introduce her to most of you.

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IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report

Interesting setup. I guess the sealed kitsune originally lived in one of those "OP preds are snacking on mortals left and right" scenarios?

The idea of a T-Rex just going to town on a naked giantess kitsune is a fun combination of sexy, kaiju spectacle and thrill.

Also, a fun coincidence: I just watched an RP between friends where a kitsune warlord was riding a T-Rex as a battle mount. Also, two of Neoneo's kitsune OCs rode a couple of adult spinosaurs, and they had a retinue of toroku (little crow-men) who rode smaller spinosaurs. It was so cute!

MasterGryph

Posted by MasterGryph 7 months ago Report

Essentially, but there were also mortals who lived long enough to learn how to fight them on an even keel. I ended up drawing a bit from Inuyasha, in that there's no real explanation for how we got from a blatantly magical past to a nearly RL modern day (with a few remnants of magic if you know where to look).

Her clan were originally assigned as guardian spirits of a particular forest. Which put them against the nearby humans who didn't know about (or see the point of) sustainable logging. Then the last head of the family went all-in on stealing souls as a shortcut to power, and telling the others that they should live hedonistically as apex predators, rather than the more casual or humble (or Switch) lifestyles their other powers and role could have led to. So, you can blame her for the escalation.


Probably too much of a tangent for a comment. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it, rough as it was. I will revisit these characters sometime. And next time, you'll have a name to call the kitsune by (though she might not want to keep her original one, after everything).

IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report

Aaah, I don't mind at all. It's pretty nice lore.

On a technical note: a typo. You wrote beliverong instead of delivering. You might also want to upload stories in a different file type, as the current one results in a side-scrolling effect which makes reading a bit finicky. I'd suggest RTF, which has the added bonus of adding extra pagraph breaks to the text (which would automatically space your paragraphs. It's also why my stories have such big paragraph gaps, because I had already put empty rows.)

MasterGryph

Posted by MasterGryph 7 months ago Report

Thanks for the advice. I'll try that next time.