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Nahari's sister is getting married, but her culture has an unusual custom which makes weddings rather perilous for sisters of the bride...
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Just like in The Maid That Stayed, 'accuracy' here plays second fiddle to 'vibes' - while I undoubtedly *was* inspired by aspects of Indian culture, Nahari et al. are not Indian but inhabitants of my mental dreamland; and I beg anyone who finds the story inaccurate to bear this in mind!
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Posted by Trying124 7 months ago Report
Dammit, why do you always have to produce such exceptional stories just after I finished doing a much less adequate one?! ;-) Absolutely phenomenal one as ever terrifically described, characters who are rich and detailed and with a really neat idea. brilliant job
Posted by Augustin 6 months ago Report
Too kind!! Thank you!
Posted by Hobby 7 months ago Report
Good read. Really loved the characters.
Posted by Augustin 6 months ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by theonlymatt 7 months ago Report
This is great. Short, gets to the point but also has just enough buildup to get invested in the characters and make it have some impact.
Posted by Augustin 6 months ago Report
That was the aim - thanks!
Posted by Bugbarw 7 months ago Report
Oh, this is really excellent. I love the idea of vore deeply baked into ritual like this. I haven't had the good fortune of reading anything by you before and am looking forward to digging into your gallery!
Posted by Augustin 6 months ago Report
Yep, it ticks two boxes for me - that there has to be a reason for the vore, and also that it's unfair (but people around don't necessarily see it that way). Hope to explore similar concepts in future stories!
Posted by doomfister 7 months ago Report
kind of cute that you named the little sister after a slow cooked meat stew, as well she was slowly cooked into shit over the course of a night ;)
Posted by Augustin 6 months ago Report
You know, I pored over a Sanskrit dictionary for the surnames, and I named Mohini after the goddess, but I didn't actually intend *that*. It fits perfectly, though, so let's pretend I did!
Posted by doomfister 6 months ago Report
All according to plan ;)
I did rather enjoy this, that casual aspect always gets me, even when the prey is awkwardly willing :)