This is fantastic! It’s not every day we get a pred who’s so philosophically fascinating. I love how much time is spent on Mel’s internal world. It was so wonderful to see her finally get to indulge.
I also really loved her deliberating about which bones to crack, as well as the hints of misandry. This was so enjoyable both on a kink and storytelling level.
Thank you! This is just the kind of comment I love to receive. I like my preds to be 'well-rounded' characters.
Re: the misandry - I've always been a fan when it's done subtly. An ingrained assumption nobody would ever challenge is stronger than a shrill assertion - and hotter too, in my opinion!
Posted by Jawasattack 4 months ago Report
MY GUY! This was incredible! Love the religion and brutality. Will be watching what you make next!
Posted by Augustin 4 months ago Report
Thanks! I'm not religious myself, but it was important to me that I was fair to Melanie. I'll hopefully write more religious stories in the future!
Posted by ReiREND 4 months ago Report
This really clicked something in me, and i LIKE IT!! Gory and heavy! Nice
Posted by Augustin 4 months ago Report
Thanks!!
Posted by Perodian 4 months ago Report
Treating vore as something in the same vein as sex is an interesting concept.
Posted by Augustin 4 months ago Report
It saves on worldbuilding, certainly!
Posted by Trying124 4 months ago Report
another terrific story from you always love seeing your work.
Posted by Augustin 4 months ago Report
As always, thanks so much!
Posted by Ikasplash 4 months ago Report
Love your stories, this one was great as usual!
Posted by Augustin 4 months ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by siliconecyborg 4 months ago Report
This is fantastic! It’s not every day we get a pred who’s so philosophically fascinating. I love how much time is spent on Mel’s internal world. It was so wonderful to see her finally get to indulge.
I also really loved her deliberating about which bones to crack, as well as the hints of misandry. This was so enjoyable both on a kink and storytelling level.
Posted by Augustin 4 months ago Report
Thank you! This is just the kind of comment I love to receive. I like my preds to be 'well-rounded' characters.
Re: the misandry - I've always been a fan when it's done subtly. An ingrained assumption nobody would ever challenge is stronger than a shrill assertion - and hotter too, in my opinion!