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Check out this awesome illustration of the story by Nalzindar!
A straightforward tale where a lovely young woman goes to do her laundry on Halloween night, and discovers that voracious worm-creatures are on the prowl!
Inspired by some conversations I had with anais2000, this the first of several shorter, to-the-point Halloween-themed vore stories I'll be posting this October! The next one is 99% finished too, so expect at least one more, hopefully two by the 31st!
Let me know how you feel about these 'quickie' type Halloween stories, as opposed to my longer, more elaborate ones. Still appreciated? Should I go back to a single large one next year? Feedback appreciated!
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Posted by V 6 months ago Report
The long epics are nice, but so are the quickies.
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 months ago Report
Yeah, I think both are nice from time to time, though I do have a tenancy to have 'scope creep' turn small ideas into big ones, unless I have a deadline like Halloween. xD
Posted by Knightx4 6 months ago Report
So question were there three worms on the hunt, or when they warp away time moves differently so when they come back their prey is already long melted away in seemingly mere seconds.
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 months ago Report
Oh yeah, it might not have been super-clear, but the intent was multiple worms. I probably should have shown two at once at some point, but couldn't quite figure out how to do it cleanly.
Posted by Knightx4 6 months ago Report
Heh, all good lol, i was fully expecting our main character here to run into one of the other ladies in the stomach, at least shes got room all to herself lol.
Posted by anais2000 6 months ago Report
I think those were different worms and there's an invasion underway.
Posted by DrakentheBlack 6 months ago Report
Not often you give us a scenario where the prey girls get to enjoy digestion alone instead of with a pile of other sexy prey piled on top of them, but I certainly enjoy it just as well!
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 months ago Report
Thanks!
Yeah, most of the time I go for multiple prey, but when I'm trying to make short quickies like this, I think it sometimes fits better to have a simple one-on-one scenario.
Posted by Mayful 6 months ago Report
Lovely little story! Love the slow, horror-esc buildup to the main event. Fits very well with the theme x3
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 months ago Report
Thank you! I was definitely going for a foreboding horror vibe, so I'm glad to hear that landed. :D
Posted by Nalzindar 6 months ago Report
This was a lovely little piece of straight-to-the-point story, and with a fantastic Halloween build-up. The worms are great, just like their sexy prey, and Allina's point of view throughout the entire story where her sight and emotions are the main focus, give it a creepy mood (t least if you didn't know what was coming for her!).
I feel a need to illustrate this one in the future (when I get my drawing pen back).
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 months ago Report
Thanks a bunch!
Glad you liked the focus on buildup and anticipation, it was fun to do!
And I'd naturally LOVE it if you decided to do an illustration of this! That would be awesome.
Posted by anais2000 6 months ago Report
Oh wow, thank you for the story and the mention! Launderettes (the commonal ones I have used in residential buildings here) have always been more than a little creepy and one could imagine anything lurking about there. In the end it was inevitable something would creep in. :)
Poor Allina! Unlike Isabella who at least tried to run away and Brandi who did put up some struggle, she got swallowed without even a chance to scream, much like her companions in misfortune!
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 months ago Report
(Sorry for late reply, weather-related power-outage xD)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked my rendition of the creepy launderette during worm invasion! Thanks for the inspiration!
And yeah, maybe Allina well less lucky or had slower reflexes . . . or maybe the worms are getting better at capturing prey without alerting anyone nearby! As you noticed, the other ladies at the launderette were caught near-silently too.
Posted by VividLucidity 5 months ago Report
Having not read the description before reading it, I fully expected the laundromat machines to become the preds. So a demonic presence overwritng the space within them into a tentacle filled stomach chamber ready to suck some prey inside. Corrupting time and space, overwriting reality.
...okay, writing this out loud, it sounds a lot stupider than it did in my head.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report
Haha, I can totally see that. xD
Weeell, stupid or not, that's more-or-less the premise to a story I wrote many years ago (Midnight Feast), though I don't think washing machines were ever the 'conduit' for the predator, just refrigerators, cupboards, etc.
Now that I think about it, that one could use a updated, modern sequel.
Posted by VividLucidity 5 months ago Report
Could be a good spooky premise, the horror of the mundane as familiar objects be overwritten by voracious horrors. Places one thought as normal, or even safe against threats, turned into the exact opposite...