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Chapter 31 of my Xantos series.
The dust is settling over the capital, but the queen is still missing. Together, Elyon and her friends must find out what happened to Nina's mother and where she might be.
Please, read and tell me what you think. The next chapter will be up already next week and the link to the thumbnail picture is here:https://aryion.com/g4/view/1057006
Posted by johaku99 6 months ago Report
Love the chapter i see Xantos wants a nother human night with Elyon not that very i blame him she is the epitome of sexyi love the line that only Xantos is alowed to do thus when she is being eaten great stuff my friend
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Posted by Nalzindar 6 months ago Report
Thanks, I'm happy to hear you say this. Xantos can be a horny bastard, and he is more in love with her than he probably wants to admit. Elyon isn't rebuffed by Xantos either, though she has a bit more reservations since she doesn't know whether she ever will be able to go home, or if she will end up pregnant if they have sex. And since Elyon is intelligent enough to know that a relationship also contains give and take, she will slowly become more willing to let him eat her as their relationship grow.
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Posted by PrinnyDood 6 months ago Report
Another very entertaining chapter! I really like the kinda of road-trip vibe going on with Xantos, Elyon, Nina (and Yuna!) as they hunt for the queen.
The plant-vore was fun and entertaining in spite of Elyon being in very little real danger, which just helped the sexy comedy aspect of the whole thing.
Once again, I'm impressed (and slightly envious) with your ability to keep such a long-running series going and consistently entertaining.
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Posted by Nalzindar 6 months ago Report
Thank you. These kind of road trips what was I originally had in mind when I started to write this series (six years ago!), adventures comes more easily when you are out travelling. My problem is that I often get stuck with details and world building. My other problem is that there is no sense of danger as long as Elyon has the ring, so things can get less exciting when she is in trouble (on the other side, her in-promptu flight over the castle walls a few chapters ago, allows for more comedic situations.
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 month ago Report
Poor Nina finally has some responsibility to go along with her authority, and Elyon has to make sure the new 'queen' keeps her head on straight.
It's cool to bring back the plant from a few chapters ago. It's always nice to have some reoccurring established life in a world.
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 month ago Report
Being thrown into a new situation is rarely fun, especially when it happens during dramatic circumstances. Elyon is fortunately a level headed advisor, at least until the point where Xantos start meddling with her personal space.
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