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Saw a pretty barista while getting myself a coffee today, thought a lot of this up while in line.
Got seriously burnt out while writing this one and it might still show in a few places.
Brooke (You): Former barista, now fulltime tit fat
The lady: An average patron at your cafe who happened to get a bigger lunch than she had expected
Posted by sheppard74 6 months ago Report
Don't sell yourself short.
The story is fine and quite enjoyable.
I had a great time reading it.
Likeable characters and the Vore part were hot as usual
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Posted by Jason789 6 months ago Report
This is hot af canne lie
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Posted by ryanshowseason3 6 months ago Report
The burn out is noticeable but it sort of lends to the casual atmosphere. I prefer the pred to tease a bit more but this feels far more correct than anything.
Might be a case where you've accidentally nailed it through inaction.
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