I don't usually enjoy stories without full digestion but I have to say this one was absolutely fantastic! A+ and I hope to see more stuff like this soon :D
and this one doesnt have that horror tone as your other story with the elf and her pet did. it was more impersonal between the snake and the girl, therefore no lingering horror factor ^^
Ohhhh, one of yours I had missed! Mmmmm, love how this purely animal instinct gone wrong. Lovely work. I hope you are able to get back to your damsels in distress work again at some point soon (in the next year or two as your new life stabilizes).
Posted by Scratch 18 years ago Report
Another great story from you. Short but well executed and its nice to see some WE once in a while. Thanks!
Posted by Jurodan 18 years ago Report
That was a very well done story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. I've seen the model used before, but you did a very good job with it.
Posted by KavenBach 18 years ago Report
Thank you both!
Posted by deleted188 18 years ago Report
I don't usually enjoy stories without full digestion but I have to say this one was absolutely fantastic! A+ and I hope to see more stuff like this soon :D
Posted by soldier148 16 years ago Report
good writing, buildup, grammer, description, and vore. a nice story in general, keep at it ^^
Posted by KavenBach 16 years ago Report
Thank you very much! And I intend to. :-)
Posted by soldier148 16 years ago Report
and this one doesnt have that horror tone as your other story with the elf and her pet did. it was more impersonal between the snake and the girl, therefore no lingering horror factor ^^
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Ohhhh, one of yours I had missed! Mmmmm, love how this purely animal instinct gone wrong. Lovely work. I hope you are able to get back to your damsels in distress work again at some point soon (in the next year or two as your new life stabilizes).
Posted by NukeJr 11 years ago Report
One of my all time faves.
Posted by NukeJr 8 years ago Report
One of my faves.