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A group of costume-clad beauties visit an abandoned house on Halloween night, and discover that just because something can't be seen, doesn't mean it can eat you!
Inspired by a suggestion from Xali, this is the 4th and final Halloween short of 2024!
Happy Halloween everyone, I hope you enjoyed the series of spooky shorts I had this year! (In spite of Hurricane Milton kinda screwing up the schedule).
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Posted by jimmypootron 6 months ago Report
I loved this one!, so happy to see multiple Halloween tales from you honestly nice to see you in action like that.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report
Thanks. I had to write a good bit in advance, but hopefully it was worth it to really embrace the Halloween spirit this year.
Posted by Randomdude5 6 months ago Report
I really like transparent stomachs monster preds.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report
Yeah, I agree - there's lots of really fun descriptions and sequences that transparent stomachs allow!
Posted by Randomdude5 5 months ago Report
One of the reasons that I like transparent stomachs, is because I like descriptions of what is happening to the girl(s) inside the stomach, and transparent stomachs encourage writers to describe those details.
Posted by Nalzindar 5 months ago Report
Three Halloween stories from you in a row feel more like a Christmas present than a Halloween treat, but I certainly won't complain!
Loved this one, the college girls were fantastic victims, and it was really fun with the predator being fully transparent while its victim were on full display. The description was unique and highly entertaining in this regard. And what more, it was great to see the cynical Susan again, deeming paperwork do be less worth than saving the five women!
Great work^^
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report
Haha, thanks! I technically did four this month, though one WAS a mostly-pure tentacle-fest.
Glad you liked the outcome! Transparent predators are tons of fun, quite a few unusual things it allows.
Yeah, Dr Shyle should probably at least make a cameo or two for Halloween, since she seems like the right woman for these types of situation.
Posted by bogtroll 5 months ago Report
Presumably the creature had guards watching it constantly after it was captured. That must have been awkward...
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report
Haha, yeah, that's a mighty awkward post indeed! xD
Posted by longwayofftiff 5 months ago Report
Yeah geez I can only imagine the sights and sounds of THAT guard duty!!
Posted by firefox01 5 months ago Report
Loved the end!
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report
Thanks! I rather like how the end came out myself.
Posted by firefox01 5 months ago Report
I love the idea that they are being left to digest as their lives are valued less than the creature and they get to know that as they are trapped! Excellent twist!
Posted by longwayofftiff 5 months ago Report
Damn, what a ride Valerie got; her youthful angelic face wedged between two perfect toned college asses as they all got digested together inside a giant invisible lizard stomach.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 months ago Report
Indeed! I'm sure she thought spending Halloween tiptoeing around a spooky mansion in skimpy costumes was as gonna be a wild ride by itself - Halloween has a way of exceeding expectations!