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A large number of beautiful, haughty elven women must face the consequences of their actions, and have judgment passed upon them by a slimy, gluttonous swamp worm.
This is a pretty shameless one I've had in the works for a while. The 'epilogue' section was originally supposed to be just a few paragraphs, but ballooned into nearly a second vore-story of it's own. Elf-girls having a very rough time isn't the newest theme from me, but I hope you'll find something to enjoy nonetheless.
Definitely the last story I'll have up in 2024. Not quite a Christmas-themed story . . . but if you think about it, these elf-girls ended up on somebody's naughty-list, so that's almost on-theme. xD
Merry Christmas, Happy New Year and all the adjacent well-wishes! See you all in 2025!
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Posted by V 4 months ago Report
Great story - I liked the variety in the after swamp as well
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report
Thanks! I don't think I've done much mass-vore with a variety of predators, so it was a fun vibe to try and capture.
Posted by Omny87 4 months ago Report
Hey, quick question: in a lot of your vore stories you mention how prey are slowly digested, although I don’t think you’ve ever gone into detail. I love implied digestion more than anything really, but I was curious how the digestion would be visually depicted in your stories? would it be something gory with flesh being burned away to reveal organs and bones, or perhaps something more “clean” or cartoonish like having them melt into a uniform goop like novelty candles? Or even just dissolved away like Alka-Seltzer?
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report
Nope, I generally avoid the specifics of the digestion process.
The unsatisfying answer is - it's vauge so the reader can imagine whatever version they like best. xP
But yeah, it would probably vary depending on how 'realistic' a tone I was going for with a particular tale, I suppose.
Posted by Omny87 4 months ago Report
Yeah, I figured as much! Thanks for answering
Posted by CoolKaios 4 months ago Report
Ohhh I alsomost feel bad...but you have away of laying out the situation and the elves were pretty cruel themselves so...Karma i suppose~
I do wonder if soul-vore is ever really "warranted" though.
But i gotta say the Swamp ladies really covered their bases though. Can't say they didn't try for mercy~
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report
Hehe, yeah, in this one I did feel like it was important to 'show' the elves being wicked in the prologue, rather than just infer it, considering the severity of their ultimate fates.
But yeah, those elves were pretty darn naughty, but you could still probably argue the Swamp Witchs went a little overboard on the punishment. xD
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 months ago Report
Would the afterswamp be a little gentler with an elf who was a bit nicer than normal.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 months ago Report
Well . . . theoretically, the Swamp Witches should be condemning only the elf-girls who totally deserve it, so it's tough to say. But perhaps there's some sort of oversight system, which serves to kick out souls if they're too innocent. xD
Posted by French_snack 4 months ago Report
Bittolyn is right, bless her cute girly excitement: That IS beautiful! :D
Also, I hope those two human servant girls helped themselves to the grapes! ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report
Bittolyn certainly has the right attitude, I agree! :D
I'm sure they had plenty of opportunity to snag those grapes in the ensuing confusion. And maybe some decent shoes, too.
Posted by jimmypootron 4 months ago Report
Loved the afterswamp! When the girls got stuck in slime I actually had my hopes up we were going to see some kind of swamp slug girl but nevertheless it was still an awesome read! Hope you have a great Christmas and new year bud!
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report
Thanks!
I actually considered a giant slug-girl (or two) for the Afterswamp, but I'm too chicken to mix my monster-vore with my giantess-vore very much, lest I turn away reader who like one but other the other. ^^;
Posted by jimmypootron 3 months ago Report
That crossover would be insane, have some fun ideas I might share!
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 months ago Report
Oh really? Slug-girls are perhaps my favorite type of giantess predator, so I'd love to hear your ideas if you're in the mood to share!
Posted by Nalzindar 4 months ago Report
Wow, it isn't often we hear about what happens after the prey has been digested, but here it seems this depends heavily on what ate you and your captor's gods. Since being eaten in the afterlife also turns out to be an option, one might wonder how other victims fare^^
Anyway, thanks for yet another great story, these elves really had it coming, I presume the other species there weren't particular sympathetic regarding their fates.
NB! I loved the variety of predators in the afterlife, these were just as good as the giant worm.
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 months ago Report
Yeah, I kinda enjoy the delightful excessiveness of prey getting eaten, digested, and then damned to the same treatment again in the afterlife. x3 It does depend heavily on the situation of course, with the witches in this case being very serious about ensuring that fate befalls their enemies.
Anyway, thanks a bunch! The variety of Afterswamp creatures was a fun highlight of the writing too.