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Tags: Accidental digestion Belly bulge Betrayal blindfolded pred bound bound and gagged Bound Prey comfort Digestion entrapment escape attempt F/F Fatal forced orgasm gutslut Hellhound Hellhound Prey Helluva Boss Imp Imp pred Loona masturbating prey Masturbation Masturbation in Belly Millie (Helluva Boss) mistaken identity Moxxie Muffled Screaming Non-fatal Oral Vore Permanent Entrapment rescue attempt Same Size sentient fat sex with pred Sexual content Size difference smaller pred talking to prey taunting teasing tight fit unaware Unwilling Prey Weight Gain Willing to unwilling pred writing
I return! With a story around 17k words, starring some of the Helluva Boss ensemble, and including of course the internet’s favourite Hellhound as the main protagonist.
Now, Loona is a great pred, as many agree, but she strikes me as the type to put on an attitude to make herself seem more of the big bad wolf than she really is, something that could well get her in trouble if she starts believing her own hype to the point that she forgets the danger posed by the other preds Hell has to offer. Appearances can be deceiving, and Millie, cutie that she is, is more than capable of putting an ornery hellhound in her place. Not that she’d do that to a good friend like Loona! … Unless of course, circumstances conspired to keep her tragically unaware of just which demon she was giving a tour of her insides…
Will Loona get a much-needed attitude adjustment and be released relatively unscathed, with the exception of her battered pride? Or will she learn her lesson too late to help her escape being doomed to an all new level of Hell on an impish assassin’s ass?
… Basically, I felt the need to bully Loona to knock her down a peg, and bully her I did.
I'd of course recommend just joining Loona on her journey to an uncertain destination, but spoiler for those who really want to know how this ends before committing to the read.
https://imgur.com/a/2zMYOfs
Thumbnail is an edit I hastily smushed together from two other vore pics, please give the artists the appreciation they deserve.
Monsterbroth https://aryion.com/g4/view/1071689
& eviltqf https://aryion.com/g4/view/1019095
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Posted by Firebird 5 months ago Report
Got to say, instant fave.
Posted by threk 5 months ago Report
And within an hour of posting too, 'instant' is right!
Posted by Firebird 5 months ago Report
Well, what can I say? You captured their personalities well, and made it very erotic. Haha almost a shame Loona got out.
Posted by threk 5 months ago Report
"Almost" being the operative word.
You can imagine an ending where she didn't wake up from her sentient fat nightmare and was digested for good if you like, it sure seems to be on Loona's mind nowadays~
Posted by thequietmanno1 5 months ago Report
Got to say, your entrapment works are some of the best on the site. Hope to see more from you down the line!
Posted by threk 5 months ago Report
Thank you very much, I try my best :)
Posted by Harleking31 5 months ago Report
Well Happy endings are not my cup of tea, but it came out great!
Posted by threk 5 months ago Report
Not how I usually end things either, haha, but I was craving the catharsis of a successful rescue for a change. After breaking her in enough to actually be grateful for it, that is :P
Posted by Harleking31 5 months ago Report
Of course! Couldn't risk her being mad or anything like that!
Posted by threk 5 months ago Report
"You fuckers are gonna be sorry!"
"Damn, still bitchy, better put her back in again."
"wait no"
Posted by Harleking31 5 months ago Report
Precisely
Make sure she's a good puppy first~
Posted by Whittlegast 5 months ago Report
What an uplifting ending! I hope Loona can fulfill her new dream and destiny of becoming Imp wobble someday
Posted by threk 5 months ago Report
Gotta ease into it, to get used to the experience of being prey WITHOUT being made pudge, before moving onto the bigger commitment.
Perhaps after some *thorough* research through the grimoire's spells for possible reformation magic, to be cast by Millie after the fact... At the imp's leisure, of course.
Posted by Justanotheruser 5 months ago Report
Hotttt i liked the story
Posted by threk 5 months ago Report
It's hot in hell!
And happy to hear it :)
Posted by Risky 5 months ago Report
Incredible work! Always love to see Loona prey, especially when theres a hint of gut slut in her. Keep up the incredible work
Posted by EagleEye 1 month ago Report
Ffffuck this is unbearably good, hot shit.
Posted by threk 1 month ago Report
Seemed a little much for Loona to bear too :P
And cheers for the appreciation :)
Posted by EagleEye 1 month ago Report
I keep coming back to this. My original comment did not do it justice.
This is genuinely one of the best vore stories I've ever read. You're amazing at describing things and creating vivid imagery; I could picture exactly the position Loona was in, how it was being used to emphasize her humiliation and loss of control, every detail was perfect.
The emotional and psychological elements are on point, absolutely phenomenally done. Managing to create a compelling character growth moment from a vore story like this is really impressive; having Loona have this horrible dream that seems not to be a dream at all (I genuinely didn't expect it even slightly until Blitz started getting in on it) and then back to the real world where she's affirmed that it wasn't real and that she is in fact loved and cared about, it's brilliant, while also still giving the fatal/cruel enjoyers something to enjoy.
It's hard to really highlight all the things I love about this, but it's basically everything. Only small detail is that Millie's dialogue sometimes switches between country/southern style to a more refined style ("I'll not be outdone" and the like), but it's such a minor detail I almost feel scummy saying it at all.
Anyway this is glorious and I love you for making it.